Question

14．李明刚转学到你们学校，发现上课听不太懂老师的英语授课，课下与外教沟通也有困难．于是他向你求助．请你给李明回封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．给出建议，如看电影，听英文新闻；
2．给出建议的理由
注意：词数100左右；
Dear Li Ming，
I'm happy to receive your email．From your e-mail，I have learned that you are having trouble with listening and speaking．
To improve your listening and speaking skill，you can try the following ways．（高分句型一）Firstly，you can watch some English movies，because they are good for you to improve your listening．What's more，you can also learn some new words and expressions．Secondly，try listening to English news，such as VOA Special English or BBC Special English，which is really good to your listening and reading ability．（高分句型二）At last，you had better talk with others in English．Don't be shy．
These are all my suggestions．I hope they can help you．I believe that you will get used to the studying there quickly．（高分句型三）
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息李明刚转学到你们学校，发现上课听不太懂老师的英语授课，课下与外教沟通也有困难．于是他向你求助．请你给李明回封电子邮件，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：给出建议，如看电影，听英文新闻；给出建议的理由2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：have trouble with在…方面有麻烦；Firstly首先；Secondly其次；What's more而且；At last最后；get used to 习惯于
To improve your listening and speaking skill，you can try the following ways．（高分句型一）
Secondly，try listening to English news，such as VOA Special English or BBC Special English，which is really good to your listening and reading ability．（高分句型二）
I believe that you will get used to the studying there quickly．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Ling Ming，
       I am happy to receive your e-mail．From your e-mail，I have learned that you are having trouble with listening and speaking．
      To improve your listening and speaking skill，you can try the following ways．（高分句型一）Firstly，you can watch some English movies，because they are good for you to improve your listening．What's more，you can also learn some new words and expressions．Secondly，try listening to English news，such as VOA Special English or BBC Special English，which is really good to your listening and reading ability．（高分句型二）At last，you had better talk with others in English．Don't be shy．
      These are all my suggestions．I hope they can help you．I believe that you will get used to the studying there quickly．（高分句型三）
      Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                      Yours，
                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．