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7.One day,while she was walking in the woods,a girl found two starving songbirds.She took them home and put them in a small cage.She cared them with love and the birds grew strong.Every morning they greeted her with a wonderful song.The girl felt great love for the birds.
One day the girl left the door to the cage open.The larger and stronger of the two birds flew from the cage.The girl was so frightened that he would fly away.As he flew close,she grasped him wildly.Her heart felt glad at her success in capturing him.Suddenly she felt the bird go limp.She opened her hand and stared in horror at the dead bird.Her desperate love had killed him.
She noticed the other bird moving back and forth on the edge of the cage.She could feel his great need for freedom.He needed to soar into the clear,blue sky.She lifted him from the cage and tossed him softly into the air.The bird circled once,twice,three times.
The girl watched delightedly at the bird's enjoyment.Her heart was no longer concerned with her loss.She wanted the bird to be happy.Suddenly the bird flew closer and landed softly on her shoulder.It sang the sweetest melody that she had ever heard.
She finally realized that the fastest way to lose love is to hold on it too tight,the best way to keep love is to give it WINGS!
[写作内容]
1.以约30个词概括短文的要点;
2.然后以约120个词就"爱就要放手"这一主题发表看法,并包括如下要点:
a) 以自己为例,简述生活中你父母对你的过度关注;
b) 你父母的做法对你造成了什么不良的影响;
c) 如果有机会,你会就此问题对父母说些什么
[写作要求]
1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子.
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称.
[评分标准]
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,语篇连贯.

分析 本文是读写任务型写作,这类作文可按照三段式模板写:第一段:概况所给短文要点.第二段:过渡词引出主题句---阐述理由.第三段:个人观点.特别要注意第一段的概括.用自己的语言概括,不能照搬照抄原文.
时态一般用一般过去时或一般现在时.人称一般以第三人称为主.
重要短语:the best way to do….(做某事最好的方法),try to do sth (努力做某事),allow sb to do(允许某人做某事),chat with (对…..聊天),suffer a lot from (遭受…..),due to(由于),make one's own decisions(自己做决定),tolerate sth(忍受某事),let go(放手).
【高分句型】
1.A girl realized the best way to keep love is to let a bird fly ①when she accidentally killed a bird  ②which tried to escape and freed the other which flew happily.
①这里是由when引导的时间状语从句,‘A girl realized the best way to keep love is to let a bird fly'为主句.
②这里是由which引导的定语从句,先行词为a bird,which在定语从句中作主语.
2.If I had the chance to talk with them about this,I would like to tell them that I can manage without their hovering over me!
这里是虚拟语气在if条件状语从句中的用法,是对现在情况的虚拟,if从句中的谓语动词形式为"were/动词的过去式",主句的谓语动词形式为"would/could/might/should+v".

解答 A girl realized the best way to keep love is to let abird fly when she accidentally killed a bird which tried to escape and freedthe other which flew happily.【高分句型】(概括)
I must admit that my parents love me very much,but their excessive love sometimes hasgone too far.Forexample,they won'tallow me to chat with my American friend online or allow me to go shopping bymyself for fear I might be cheated though I am already 18 years old.What's worse,they even secretly read my diary.(举例简述生活中父母对自己的过度关注)
To be honest,I am now suffering a lot from this.Due to their excessive love,I don't have many friends.As a girl of 18,I am not able to make my own decisionsabout many things.Though I can't tolerate all this,I dare not speak up for I know this isall due to their deep love for me.(父母的做法对自己的不良影响)
 If I had the chance to talk with them about this,I would like to tell them that I canmanage without their hovering over me!【高分句型】I'd liketo say to them,"Pleaselet go of your anxiety.Give me some advice just when necessary,and for most of the time,let me think for myself.Your love should never be a burden on me.Love me,and let me fly with it."(想对父母所说的话)

点评 读写任务型写作是将阅读与写作有机结合,要求考生既能读懂文章信息,又要依据要求规范连贯地表达内容,其中准确概括很有挑战且十分重要,根据记叙文、议论文、说明文等不同文体作相应概括,总的来说,遵循以下步骤:确定主题句;寻找关键词;重构主题句;重组支持句.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型.

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