Question

12．假定你是李华．你收到了美国朋友彼得寄来的最新英文小说．请给他回信，要点如下：
1．小说收到；
2．回赠礼物；
3．礼物意义；
4．邀请来华．
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Peter
I'm glad to receive the novel．Thank you for such a lovely gift as I have been expecting for a long time．【高分句型一】This novel gives me some insights into American society and daily life．（感谢礼物）
I know you're interested in Chinese festivals，and therefore I choose an album of paper cutting for you．Paper cutting is a unique form of Chinese cultural relics，which is often used as a decoration for a joyous atmosphere．【高分句型二】I hope it will bring happiness and luck to your family as it always does in China．（回赠礼物以及礼物意义）
Expecting you to come to China and experience the rich culture in person．（邀请来华）
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 解析
这是一篇关于礼物的作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一感谢礼物；二回赠礼物以及礼物意义；三邀请来华．
高分句型：
1．Thank you for such a lovely gift as I have been expecting for a long time．句子里as引导定语从句，代指先行词a lovely gift，和such呼应．
感谢你这份可爱的礼物，这一直是我期盼的．
2．Paper cutting is a unique form of Chinese cultural relics，which is often used as a decoration for a joyous atmosphere句子里which引导非限制性定语从句，代指先行词Paper cutting．
剪纸是中国文化传承的独特形式之一，它经常用于装饰欢乐气氛的．

解答 Dear Peter，
      I'm glad to receive the novel．Thank you for such a lovely gift as I have been expecting for a long time．【高分句型一】This novel gives me some insights into American society and daily life．（感谢礼物）
      I know you're interested in Chinese festivals，and therefore I choose an album of paper cutting for you．Paper cutting is a unique form of Chinese cultural relics，which is often used as a decoration for a joyous atmosphere．【高分句型二】I hope it will bring happiness and luck to your family as it always does in China．（回赠礼物以及礼物意义）
      Expecting you to come to China and experience the rich culture in person．（邀请来华）
      Best wishes．
                                                                                                                                                                                                Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．