Question

11．近年来，各地媒体不断推出各种选秀节目，电视选秀非常流行，同时不少年轻人，甚至高中生也参加了这类节目．请以"电视选秀节目（TV talent show）之利弊"为主题，用英文写一篇120个词左右的短文．要点如下：
1、简述电视选秀节目的现状；
2、你对选秀节目利弊的看法并说明你的理由．

Answer 1

分析 本文为利弊型作文，要求对电视选秀节目进行利弊分析，本文要点已给出但是要做适当的扩展，写作内容包括：简述电视选秀节目的现状，选秀节目的利弊，自己对电视选秀节目的看法，注意使用连接词，使作文内容连贯，注意写作的时态．时态用一般现在时，人称用第三人称．
重要短语：
come up with想出，
grow in向里长
Meanwhile与此同时
attend these shows参加这些选秀
As far as I am concerned就自己而言
On the one hand一方面，On the other hand另一方面
Therefore因此
importance for one's对某人很重要
 
 高分句型：
1．With different media across China comingup with various shows，TV talent show has grown in popularity in recent years．
此句用了With的复合结构．with+宾语+现在分词（宾语与宾补之间是主动关系）
　　如：Withwinter coming on，it's time tobuy warm clothes．
2．As far as I am concerned，TV talent show is like adouble-edged sword，which can do us both good and harm．
句中含有which引导的定语从句，which代替上文中所提到的TV talent show．
which指物，在定语从句中做主语或者宾语，做宾语时可省略
（1）Football is a game which is liked bymost boys．
（2）This is the pen （which） he boughtyesterday．

3．they can make easy money or becomefamous overnight，ignoring the fact of"No pains，no gains．
ignoring the fact of"No pains，no gains．现在分词短语做状语，作状语分词在意义上也可用作状语，表示时间、原因、方式和伴随情况等．
　Opening the drawer he took out a dictionary．他打开抽屉，拿出一本词典．（=He opened the drawer and took…这两个动作是一个接着一个）
  She stood there waiting for the bus．她站在那儿等公共汽车．（伴随情况或方式）
No pains，no gains 译为不劳不获，此句为一句谚语．如：love me，love my dog译为爱屋及乌

解答 With different media across China coming upwith various shows，TV talent show has grown in popularity in recent years．（高分句型）Meanwhile，it is not uncommon to see manyyoung people，even highschool students，attend theseshows．（电视选秀节目的现状）
    As far as I am concerned，TV talent show is like a double-edged sword，which can do us both good and harm．（高分句型）On the one hand，these shows can provide preciousopportunities for the young to express themselves and to perform their talentsof singing，dancing andso on．On the otherhand，they may alsomislead the youth and make them believe that they can make easy money or becomefamous overnight，ignoring the fact of"No pains，no gains．"（高分句型）（我对电视选秀节目的看法）
    Therefore，it is of vital importance for us，especially young people and their parents，to think twice before attendingthem．（对此做出总结）

点评 这是一篇所给材料比较详细的利弊类作文，我们要做的就是把这些内容用正确的英语表达出来，动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，同时要表达出自己的观点，可适当的发挥，在写作时要注意时态，人称，固定词组搭配，要注意语言的规范性，做到上下文联系紧密，条理清楚，符合逻辑关系．