Question

下面短文中有10 处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个的单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10 处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分。

Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.

Answer 1

Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited ∧ a bus to come at a stop.

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30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner

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had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught

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it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize

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my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now,

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whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.

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