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5．假设你是李华，你是英国笔友Bruce的父母因为工作调动（job transfer）要到你所在的城市工作，他们计划搬到你所在的小区住，Bruce写信询问小区情况，请你根据以下提示给他回信．要点如下：
1．表示欢迎；  
2．你所在小区适宜居住的理由（至少两条）．
注意：1．词数100左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Bruce，
I am so pleased to receive your letter．I am even happier to hear that you and your family will move to our neighborhood next month．（高分句型一）
You are really going to enjoy staying in our neighborhood．Firstly，it is a wonderful，peaceful and clean area with a lot of greenery and open spaces to play in．Secondly，people in my neighborhood are friendly and easy-going．Thirdly，the houses are beautiful and I hold the belief that your parents will find the house to their taste．（高分句型二）Fourthly，there are many nice shops where we can do some shopping together．（高分句型三）Last but not least，it is convenient to travel from here to other areas of the city．You will definitely be happy here．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息你是英国笔友Bruce的父母因为工作调动（job transfer）要到你所在的城市工作，他们计划搬到你所在的小区住，Bruce写信询问小区情况，请你根据以下提示给他回信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：表示欢迎；  你所在小区适宜居住的理由（至少两条）． 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：Firstly首先；Secondly其次；Thirdly第三；Fourthly第四；Last but not least最后同样最重要；
I am even happier to hear that you and your family will move to our neighborhood next month．（高分句型一）
Thirdly，the houses are beautiful and I hold the belief that your parents will find the house to their taste．（高分句型二）
Fourthly，there are many nice shops where we can do some shopping together．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Bruce，
      I am so pleased to receive your letter．I am even happier to hear that you and your family will move to our neighborhood next month．（高分句型一）
      You are really going to enjoy staying in our neighborhood．Firstly，it is a wonderful，peaceful and clean area with a lot of greenery and open spaces to play in．Secondly，people in my neighborhood are friendly and easy-going．Thirdly，the houses are beautiful and I hold the belief that your parents will find the house to their taste．（高分句型二）Fourthly，there are many nice shops where we can do some shopping together．（高分句型三）Last but not least，it is convenient to travel from here to other areas of the city．You will definitely be happy here．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                               Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                               Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．