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12.假如你李华,你所在的学校摄影协会将在周六上午到北山公园举行主题为"the
Beauty of Nature"的活动,外教Bob由于不熟悉地形,你给他寄去一张路线图并写
一封信,以便他能顺利到达.
主要内容:1.说明活动集合的时间(上午9:00)和集合地点(公园入口);
  2.介绍从校门口到公园的路线;承诺在公园门口等他.
  3.希望Bob能玩得尽兴.
要    求:1.字数:100左右
   2.根据内容,适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
   3.开头和结尾已为你写好
参考词汇:摄影协会:photography club,路线:route,校园路:Campus Road
Dear Bob,
I am glad to inform you that our photography club is going to have an activity with the topic"the Beauty of Nature"in Bei Shan Park this Saturday.
                                                        
Best wishes
Yours truly
Li Hua.

分析 本篇书面表达属于图表类作文,根据提示信息给外教Bob 寄去一张路线图并写一封信,以便他能顺利到达.写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:说明活动集合的时间(上午9:00)和集合地点(公园入口);介绍从校门口到公园的路线;承诺在公园门口等他.希望Bob能玩得尽兴.
 2、图表是文章的总体框架,要在图表的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:be familiar with对…熟悉,get close to靠近,live in harmony with nature与自然和谐相处,have a good time过得愉快
Since you are not familiar with the city,let me tell you how to get to the park.(高分句型一)
Dear Bob,I believe the activity is a good chance for us to get close to nature and know how to live in harmony with nature.(高分句型二)

解答 Dear Bob,
     I am glad to inform you that our photography club is going to have an activity with the topic"the Beauty of Nature"in Bei Shan Park this Saturday.We will meet at the entrance of the park at 9:00 a.m..Since you are not familiar with the city,let me tell you how to get to the park.(高分句型一)After going out of our school,go along Campus Road until you come to the first traffic lights.Then turn right.Go straight along Bei Shan Road and after ten minutes you'll see the park at the end of the road,and we will be waiting for you at the gate.Dear Bob,I believe the activity is a good chance for us to get close to nature and know how to live in harmony with nature.(高分句型二)I am sure we will have a good time.
       Best wishes
                                                          Yours truly,
                                                             Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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