Question

农历新年将至，你的班级将在学期结束之际举行一个新年派对。请写一篇英语短文在你的博客上介绍这次派对的一些情况。你的文章应该包含以下要点：
派对的准备情况 （购买气球、彩带装饰班级，准备礼物）。
派对的内容 （互换新年礼物, 表达新年祝福, 进行表演、游戏等活动）。
你准备的礼物与你期待收到的礼物。
注意：1．可以适当组合要点，适当删减或添加信息以使文章流畅。
2．必须使用至少一个定语从句，一个被动语态。
3．词数100左右。段落开头语已为你写好。
参考词汇:  balloon (气球)，  ribbon (彩带)，  exchange (交换)
The Lunar New Year is drawing near. At the end of this term, my class will have a party.
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Answer 1

The Lunar New Year is drawing near. At the end of this term, my class will have a party. The classroom has been decorated with colorful ribbons and balloons ahead of time. We are all very excited about the party, at which we will exchange gifts, make New Year wishes, put on performances as well as play games. It’s great fun receiving a gift from someone else and we all want to give a gift to make the receiver feel special.
I have had my gift ready. I prepared a notebook ,which is very special because there are many beautiful poems on its papers. I copied a piece of Tagore’s work on the first paper, which expresses my best wishes to the receiver. I hope I can get a cup which I have always longed for. I can hardly wait for the party and I am sure we will have a wonderful time then.

试题分析：本文是一篇提纲类书面表达。主要是介绍新年派对派对的一些情况。包括准备情况和内容及收送礼物情况。本文要点提示较多，内容只要根据要点适当删减或添加信息就可以了。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意按要求必须使用至少一个定语从句，一个被动语态，词数100左右。
点评：提纲类书面表达主要特点是：要点明确，范围具体，贴近生活，易于动笔。此类试题中有较多的文字说明，实际上规定了考生表述的思路，对考生的写作范围作了较为明确的限定，试题中规定的要点一个也不能回避。考生极易受中文提纲的制约，将书面表达变成了翻译，造成语法结构和语汇上的单调，因此平时要多练习，活用语言，使文章流畅。