Question

8．毕业季也是感恩季．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请给你在高中三年所遇到的人或事物写一封感谢信，新的内容包括：
1．感谢的人或事物；
2．感谢的原因；
3．你的美好愿望．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
DearSamantha，
I am writing to you to let you know how lucky I am to have you as a teacher．From day one，I enjoyed each and every class of yours．（高分句型一）You could always make your lessons informative，educational and enjoyable all at the same time．Every day I looked forward to your class，which was a surprise from a student who hated and dreaded English．（高分句型二）It was you who awakened my interest in English and restored my confidence in myself．I enjoyed everything you taught us，from the English language to American culture．The smell of the pancakes we made together in your class is still clear in our minds，and it simply makes my mouth water．
（高分句型三） You are a special teacher whom I will always remember with fond memories．You are a great inspiration to us all!
A big and warm"Thank you!"from your beloved student!May you continue to inspire greatness in all of your students!，
Yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息请写一封感谢信参加接力，写作时注意以下几点：1、感谢的人或事物；感谢的原因；你的美好愿望．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态，就本文而言应该用一般现在时态并结合部分一般过去时．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
（高分句型一）You could always make your lessons informative，educational and enjoyable all at the same time．
该句型使用了make+宾语+宾语补足语，informative，educational and enjoyable 三个形容词做宾语补足语；
（高分句型二）It was you who awakened my interest in English and restored my confidence in myself．
  该句使用了强调句It was you who…强调主语you；
（高分句型三） You are a special teacher whom I will always remember with fond memories．
该句式使用了whom引导定语从句，whom充当宾语；
高级词汇：informative，educational and enjoyable 有信息的、教育的、有乐趣的；awaken唤醒；inspire激励；

解答 Dear Samantha，
      I am writing to you to let you know how lucky I am to have you as a teacher．From day one，I enjoyed each and every class of yours．（高分句型一）You could always make your lessons informative，educational and enjoyable all at the same time．Every day I looked forward to your class，which was a surprise from a student who hated and dreaded English．（高分句型二）It was you who awakened my interest in English and restored my confidence in myself．I enjoyed everything you taught us，from the English language to American culture．The smell of the pancakes we made together in your class is still clear in our minds，and it simply makes my mouth water．（高分句型三） You are a special teacher whom I will always remember with fond memories．You are a great inspiration to us all!
      A big and warm"Thank you!"from your beloved student!May you continue to inspire greatness in all of your students!
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．