Question

9．近年来社会上发生了多起因为热心助人不得好报而摊上一堆麻烦事儿的事，因而很多人陷入"助人恐惧"中．最近，你们班就"是否应该帮助他人"展开了讨论，同学们就这一话题意见不一，你的看法如何？你认为怎样才能让爱心回归社会，建立人与人之间的信任？请根据讨论结果，以"Should We Help Others？"为题写一篇短文．

赞成	帮助他人是美德…；帮助他人就是帮助自己…；…
反对	怕陷入麻烦，甚至危险；怕被误解；…
你的观点？	（至少两点）

注意：
1．词数120左右；
2．开头已写好，不计入总词数；
3．覆盖所有要点，适当发挥；
4．文中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名．
Should We Help Others？We used to think highly of those who like to help others．But nowadays people tend to be very cautious of helping others．Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help others．Opinions are divided on this topic．
Some think we should try to help others when they are in trouble．Helping others is a virtue，and it will make our society more harmonious．Besides，to some extent，helping others is helping oneself．We may come across some trouble and need others'help some day．If everyone turns a blind eye to our trouble and turns a deaf ear to our appeal for aid just because we might do harm to them，it's hard to imagine what our world will be like．
However，others are afraid that helping others can sometimes bring us trouble or even put us in danger．Sometimes we are just misunderstood and thus have to pay the cost of kindness．．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
If everyone turns a blind eye to our trouble and turns a deaf ear to our appeal for aid just because we might do harm to them，it's hard to imagine what our world will be like
如果每个人都视而不见，变成我们的麻烦听我们的呼吁援助，因为我们可能会伤害到他们，很难想象我们的世界会是什么样子．
高分句型二：
Sometimes we are just misunderstood and thus have to pay the cost of kindness．
有时我们只是被误解了，因此必须付出善意的代价．

解答 Should We Help Others？
    We used to think highly of those who like to help others．But nowadays people tend to be very cautious of helping others．Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help others．Opinions are divided on this topic．
    Some think we should try to help others when they are in trouble．Helping others is a virtue，and it will make our society more harmonious．Besides，to some extent，helping others is helping oneself．We may come across some trouble and need others'help some day．If everyone turns a blind eye to our trouble and turns a deaf ear to our appeal for aid just because we might do harm to them，it's hard to imagine what our world will be like（高分句型一）．
    However，others are afraid that helping others can sometimes bring us trouble or even put us in danger．Sometimes we are just misunderstood and thus have to pay the cost of kindness（高分句型二）．

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．