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3．假设你是李华，距高考还有2个月左右，现在你正在备战高考，中学生活即将结束，在这个特殊时期，请根据以下内容给自己的父母写一封信．
内容要点：
1．感谢父母多年来，特别是高三这一年来的关怀．
2．向父母简要汇报自己的学习情况．
3．高考之后帮父母做些家务和自己的打算．
注意：1．词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯．
Dear parents，
      Now I know clearly that you both are expecting me anxiously．
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Yours
LI Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，在距高考还有2个月左右，在这个特殊时期给自己的父母写一封信，表达对父母的感谢、汇报自己的学习情况并谈谈自己的打算．写作时人称以第一人称和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主．写作要点：1．感谢父母多年来，特别是高三这一年来的关怀； 2．向父母简要汇报自己的学习情况； 3．高考之后帮父母做些家务和自己的打算．重要短语：thanks to （多亏了，由于），on this special occasion （在这个特殊的场合），words fail sb（话说不出来），made some progress （取得进展），get along well with （进展得很好），perform one'sability（表现某人的能力），set one's mind at rest （使某人安心），intend to do （想要做，打算去做），mean to do sth （打算（意欲）让某人做某事），in person （亲自），go on well with （进展顺利；与…相处融洽），have a rest （休息）．
【高分句型】
1．I can say nothing but thanks to you both on this special occasion，①because words have failed me ②when I want to express my thanks to you both for the loving care ③you have shown for me，
①这里是由because引导的原因状语从句．
②这里是由when引导的时间状语从句．
③这里是由省略了关系代词that或which的定语从句，先行词是 the loving car，定语从句中动词shown缺少宾语．
2．I intend to help you do some housework which I have seldom done before．And I also mean to learn to cook for you both in person．
这里是由which引导的定语从句，先行词是housework，which在定语从句中作动词done的宾语．

解答 Dear parents，
Now I know clearly that you both are expecting me anxiously．I can say nothing but thanks to you both on this special occasion，becausewords have failed me when I want to express my thanks to you both for theloving care you have shown for me，【高分句型】especially since I went to Senior Three．（感恩父母）These days I have been studying hard and have made someprogress．And everything has got along well with my college entranceexamination．I will perform my ability in the future exam．I hope you both canset your mind at rest．（汇报学习情况）
After the exam，I intend to help you do some housework whichI have seldom done before．And I also mean to learn to cook for you both inperson．【高分句型】（高考后的打算）
My dear parents，everything is going on well with me and dohave a rest!
Best wishes！
Yours，
LI Hua

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．