Question

18．假如你叫李华．你的美国朋友Tom即将参加一个汉语演讲比赛，他为此感到十分紧张．因此，他写信向你咨询如何克服赛前的紧张情绪．请你根据以下要点给他写一封回信：
（1）表示理解并给予安慰；
（2）给出建议并说明理由；
（3）表达祝愿．
注意：（1）词数100左右．
（2）可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯．
参考词汇：汉语演讲比赛the Chinese Speech Contest
Dear Tom，
You wrote to ask for advice on how to get rid of your nervousness right before the Chinese Speech Contest．What you should keep in mind is that most people feel nervous like you．Just take it easy．Here are some suggestions which I think may be helpful．
First，you should be prepared and understand the subject of your speech completely．The more familiar you are with the subject，the less nervous you will be．Besides，look at your nervousness as a positive thing，which can give you the energy to deliver your speech in an emotive way．Last but not least，as the old saying goes，the confidence is the first secret of success．So do have faith in yourself．
Hope these can benefit you．May you succeed in the competition！
Yours，
Lihua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一封安慰信．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：（1）表示理解并给予安慰；（2）给出建议并说明理由；（3）表达祝愿．
高分句型：
1．What you should keep in mind is that most people feel nervous like you．句子里What引导主语从句 you should keep in mind做从句的宾语；that引导表语从句 most people feel nervous like you
你应该知道的是多数人都和你一样紧张．
2．The more familiar you are with the subject，the less nervous you will be．句子里用了比较级+比较级的结构，表示"越来越"．
你对课程越熟悉，你就越不会紧张．

解答 Dear Tom，
      You wrote to ask for advice on how to get rid of your nervousness right before the Chinese Speech Contest．What you should keep in mind is that most people feel nervous like you．【高分句型一】Just take it easy．Here are some suggestions which I think may be helpful．（表示理解并给予安慰）
     First，you should be prepared and understand the subject of your speech completely．The more familiar you are with the subject，the less nervous you will be．【高分句型二】Besides，look at your nervousness as a positive thing，which can give you the energy to deliver your speech in an emotive way．Last but not least，as the old saying goes，the confidence is the first secret of success．So do have faith in yourself．（给出建议并说明理由）
     Hope these can benefit you．May you succeed in the competition！（表达祝愿）
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 考查提纲类作文．
审题是否清楚是一篇书面表达成功与否的关键所在，在整个写作过程中起着决定性作用．审好题会让我们做到"磨刀不误砍柴工"，审题时要做到以下几点：
（1）审要求：书面表达试题一般都由"情景"和"要求"两部分构成．"情景"中包括所写材料的目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等，一般在书面表达题的前半部分；而"要求"一般在书面表达的后半部分，以"注意"形式给出，实际上是对考生提出的要求．因而考生对于题目所提供的说明，应认真分析、反复推敲，搞清提出的内容要求，抓住所要表达的信息点． （2）审文体：高考书面表达的体裁一般有三大类：记叙文、说明文和应用文，具体形式有便条，日记，通知，书信，人物、事情、情景故事的描写，看图说话，缩写，扩写，改写等．审题时要审清文体，注意格式上的不同，避免出错．
（3）审人称：审查书面表达题干中隐含的读者对象和撰写人，即搞清楚此篇文章是"由谁写给谁"的．写稿人是谁一般都已明确指出，给出形式假设环境中的"某人"，如"假设你是李华"，写作时即用第一人称"我"，即李华．而读者对象有时没有明示，要考生自己去进行判断．
（4）审时态：根据情景判断短文需要的主体时态，即搞清楚要写的是什么时候的事，过去的就用过去时．比如日记，是叙述过去发生的事情，自然用过去时；通知多用将来时．