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3．假如你是红星中学高一（1）班李华，你和你的同学打算今年暑假去纽约旅游，现在给笔友Chris写封信，请他帮助寻找寄宿家庭．
具体要求如下：1．住宿时间：两周；2．住宿要求：环境安全，交通便利，有独立房间，有同龄孩子．
注意：1．词数120左右；2．可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；
Dear Chris，
                                                 
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假如你是红星中学高一（1）班李华，你和你的同学打算今年暑假去纽约旅游，现在给笔友Chris写封信，请他帮助寻找寄宿家庭．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：住宿时间：两周；住宿要求：环境安全，交通便利，有独立房间，有同龄孩子．  2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：go on a holiday度假；of my own属于自己的；far away from 远离；That is to say也就是说；get along well with 相处的好；In addition另外；Look forward to盼望；
First，I'd like to have a room of my own，which is clean and comfortable．（高分句型一）
Thus I can get along well with them and practice my spoken English．（高分句型二）
In addition，I'd appreciate it if the host family can provide a washing machine and some cookers without additional charges so that I am able to wash my clothes and cook my own meals．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Chris，
       I am going to go on a holiday in New York for two weeks next month．I am writing to ask you to find a host family for me．Here are my requirements．
       First，I'd like to have a room of my own，which is clean and comfortable．（高分句型一）Second，the apartment should not be far away from the center of the city．That is to say，it is convenient for me to get around．Third，the family members are warm-hearted and I hope there are children of my age．Thus I can get along well with them and practice my spoken English．（高分句型二）In addition，I'd appreciate it if the host family can provide a washing machine and some cookers without additional charges so that I am able to wash my clothes and cook my own meals．（高分句型三）
        Looking forward to your early reply．
                                                                                                                                                                     Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                     Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．