Question

1．作文要求：翻译下面一段话，文中至少要有2个定语从句，和1个名词性从句，一个非谓语短语（尤其关注中文划线部分）．
Tom 现在正从上星期天的交通事故中康复．虽然他的左手仍然很弱，但是，他能感觉到冷和热．在中山医院持续了4个小时的手术对他有极大的帮助．在手术中，他使左手成功地被连附（attach）起来．
Tom 在山路上引领一群游客时受了伤，这导致他失去了左手．组员们迅速将他送到最近的一家医院，然后他被空运到中山医院接受手术，这是一家据信是能够找到的最好的医院之一．Tom 的医生目前已经为他制定出了一个安全的治疗计划．这对于Tom来说可能很痛苦，但是预料在接下来的几个月中，他的身体将会接受这只新手而不会有任何缺陷．
失去左手的可能性曾经使Tom非常担忧，但是现在他对于正在接受的治疗很有信心．他对医生充满了感激，并且感觉很有希望在不久的将来完全恢复左手的功能．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
then he was airlifted to Zhongshan hospital for surgery，which is one be believed to be the best hospital to be founded
然后他被空运到中山医院接受手术，这是一家据信是能够找到的最好的医院之一．
高分句型二：
The possibility of losting his left hand used to make Tom very worried，but now he is very confident for the treatment he accepted．
失去左手的可能性曾经使Tom非常担忧，但是现在他对于正在接受的治疗很有信心．

解答 Tom now is recovering from the traffic accident on Sunday．Although his left hand is still weak，but he could feel hot and cold．In Zhongshan hospital 4 hours of surgery are of great help to him．During the surgery，he was successfully attached to the left hand．
Tom got injured in leading a group of tourists on the road，which led him lose his left hand．The members quickly sent him to the nearest hospital，then he was airlifted to Zhongshan hospital for surgery，which is one be believed to be the best hospital to be founded（高分句型一）．Tom's doctor has been made out a safe treatment plan for Tom．This may be painful，but is expected in the next few months，his body will accept the new hand without any defects．The possibility of losting his left hand used to make Tom very worried，but now he is very confident for the treatment he accepted（高分句型二）．He was very grateful to the doctor，and felt very hopeful of full recovering his left hand's function in soon future．

点评 作文翻译是要注意逐字逐句翻译，对于字词的翻译要到位，语句要通顺，然后在正确的运用名词性从句，非限制性从句等句式为作文增彩．