Question

2．假设你是李华，你所在的学校与美国BASIS Tucson中学有一个交流项目（Exchange Program），此项目为部分同学提供在美国学习一年的机会．现在你有意要参加该项目，请根据以下内容要点，用英语向该校写一份申请．
1．渴望了解不同文化，乐于传播中国文化；
2．现正在寄宿学校（boarding school）上学，习惯离家生活；
3．新的经历对性格培养有益，是学习、锻炼的好机会．
注意：
1．短文必须包括以上要点，可适当添加细节．
2．词数：100词左右．开头已经为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Sir or Madam，
How is everything with you？
I′m so glad to hear that there is an opportunity to study in America．Therefore，I′m writing this letter to apply to take part in the exchange program．I think I must be the best choice for you due to my following advantages over others．（高分句型一）
First，I′m interested in different cultures and am willing to make Chinese culture known to more people．Furthermore，because I am studying in a boarding school now，I have been used to living away from my home and there is no doubt that I can take care of myself．（高分句型二）Above all，new experiences are beneficial to developing good characters．（高分句型三）So it is supposed to be a good chance to learn and improve myself．
Hope to hear from you soon．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息 假设你是李华，你所在的学校与美国BASIS Tucson中学有一个交流项目（Exchange Program），此项目为部分同学提供在美国学习一年的机会．现在你有意要参加该项目，请根据以下内容要点，用英语向该校写一份申请，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：渴望了解不同文化，乐于传播中国文化；现正在寄宿学校（boarding school）上学，习惯离家生活；新的经历对性格培养有益，是学习、锻炼的好机会．
2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：Therefore因此；apply to 申请；take part in 参加；Furthermore而且；be used to习惯于；there is no doubt that毫无疑问；Above all最重要的是；hear from受到某人的信息；
I think I must be the best choice for you due to my following advantages over others．（高分句型一）
Furthermore，because I am studying in a boarding school now，I have been used to living away from my home and there is no doubt that I can take care of myself．（高分句型二）
Above all，new experiences are beneficial to developing good characters．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
       How is everything with you？
       I′m so glad to hear that there is an opportunity to study in America．Therefore，I′m writing this letter to apply to take part in the exchange program．I think I must be the best choice for you due to my following advantages over others．（高分句型一）
       First，I′m interested in different cultures and am willing to make Chinese culture known to more people．Furthermore，because I am studying in a boarding school now，I have been used to living away from my home and there is no doubt that I can take care of myself．（高分句型二）Above all，new experiences are beneficial to developing good characters．（高分句型三）So it is supposed to be a good chance to learn and improve myself．
       Hope to hear from you soon．
                                                                                                                                             
Yours，
                                                                    Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．