Question

4．假定你是李华，是你校模拟联合国大会主席．你校将举办第五次模联活动，请给你们的外教Smith老师写封信，邀请他担任指导老师（advisor）．信的内容包括：
（1）主题：全球气候；
（2）举办时间和地点；
（3）指导老师的任务．
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
模拟联合国大会：MUN
Dear Mr．Smith，
Our school MUN is going to hold the fifth Model United Nations on November 10 and 11 in Meeting Rooms One，Two and Three．（要点二）The theme is global climate．We sincerely invite you to be one of the advisors．（要点一）
There are some new members in MUN，and the process，how to prepare for MUN and how to write the position paper，etc．are too complicated for them．【高分句型一】Therefore，advisors are needed to train them．Besides，in order to improve their English，some teams are determined to use English as their work language．（要点三）How to express themselves properly and correctly in oral or written English is a problem．So we are in great need of native English speakers as our advisors．【高分句型二】I know you are a MUN lover．Do come and join us．

Yours sincerely

Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型
句型一：
There are some new members in MUN，and the process，how to prepare for MUN and how to write the position paper，etc．are too complicated for them．使用There be…句型，how to prepare for"怎么去准备"．
句型二：
So we are in great need of native English speakers as our advisors．"所以我们非常需要以英语为母语的人作为我们的顾问．"in great need of 表示"非常需要"．

解答 Dear Mr．Smith，
      Our school MUN is going to hold the fifth Model United Nations on November 10 and 11 in Meeting Rooms One，Two and Three．（要点二）The theme is global climate．We sincerely invite you to be one of the advisors．（要点一）
     There are some new members in MUN，and the process，how to prepare for MUN and how to write the position paper，etc．are too complicated for them．【高分句型一】Therefore，advisors are needed to train them．Besides，in order to improve their English，some teams are determined to use English as their work language．（要点三）How to express themselves properly and correctly in oral or written English is a problem．So we are in great need of native English speakers as our advisors．【高分句型二】I know you are a MUN lover．Do come and join us．
                                                                                                                                                                                                           Yours sincerely
                                                                                                                                                                                                             Li Hua

点评 作文考查学生对英语的表达能力．提纲类作文要注意要点齐全，不可遗漏，注意人称和时态，注意语句连贯，思路清晰．