分析 本文是一篇提纲作文.根据所提供的材料信息,以"On the Way to School"为题写一篇短文,又属命题作文."中国式"过马路是网友对部分中国人集体闯红灯现象的一种调侃,这种现象已经引起人们的普遍关注,同样也引起了中学生对自己日常文明行为的反思..
写作时人称以第一人称为主,时态以一般过去时为主.
写作要点:1.遵守交通法规; 2.注意举止文明;3.个人建议.
重要短语:break traffic rules(违反交通规则),cause serious harm to (造成伤害),considerable efforts (大量的努力),keep traffic rules in mind (牢记交通规则),regard sth as…(把…看作),keep form sth(阻止做某事),clean up sth(清理某物),whenever possible(在可能的任何时候),spare no efforts(不遗余力),make a difference(产生影响).
【高分句型】
1.These days,①breaking traffic rules and littering are not uncommon,②causing serious harm to life and the environment.
①此处是由两个并列的动名词短语"breaking traffic rules and littering"作主语.
②此处是由现在分词短语作结果状语,主句的主语是"breaking traffic rules and littering"即"违反交通规则和乱扔杂物".
2.Changing this situation requires considerable efforts on the part of everyone.
此处是由动名词短语"Changing this situation"作主语,谓语动词用单数.
2.Not only will I keep form littering or spitting anywhere,but I will help clean up the roadside litter whenever possible.
此处是"not only…,but also…"结构,not only 后引导的句子用部分倒装.
解答 On the Way to School
These days,breaking traffic rules and littering are not uncommon,causing serious harm to life and the environment.【高分句型】Changing this situation requires considerable efforts on the part of everyone.【高分句型】As for me,it should start on my way to school.(遵守交通法规)
I will keep traffic rules in mind all the way.If I ride a bike,I'll always keep the right and never cross a road until the traffic light turns green.If I walk,I‘ll never forget to use the pedestrian crossing.Meanwhile,I will regard it as my duty to help keep our environment clean and healthy.Not only will I keep form littering or spitting anywhere,but I will help clean up the roadside litter whenever possible.【高分句型】(注意举止文明)
I believe all of us should fight now and spare no efforts to do every little bit every day,every hour and every minute,and thus our behaviors will make a difference.(个人建议)
点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型.
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