假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作女文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．刪除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线．并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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15．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作女文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
刪除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线．并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Last weekend，my classmate and I went on a camping trip near the river．It was not long distance，so we chose to get here by bike．
We started with early in the morning．On the way，we talked about that we saw around．It takes about half an hour to get to the place．On arriving，some girls sat down，had her breakfast and listened to the birds sings．Some admired the river while others drew pictures．My friends and I found a quietly place and went fishing．To our surprise，we got much fishes．
Time passed so quickly and we had to say goodbye．I enjoyed the pleasant or exciting trip．

分析本文讲述的是自己和朋友一次钓鱼的经历．
周末我会朋友骑自行车出河边钓鱼．河边一些女孩一边吃早餐一边听着鸟儿的鸣叫，我们找了一个安静的位置开始钓鱼，让我们吃惊的是我们竟然钓到了很多鱼．我们很高兴很愉快．

解答 Last weekend，my classmate and I went on a camping trip near the river．It was not∧long distance，so we chose to get here by bike．
We started with early in the morning．On the way，we talked about that we saw around．It takes about half an hour to get to the place．On arriving，some girls sat down，had her breakfast and listened to the birds sings．Some admired the river while others drew pictures．My friends and I found a quietly place and went fishing．To our surprise，we got much fishes．
Time passed so quickly and we had to say goodbye．I enjoyed the pleasant or exciting trip．
解析：
l．classmate→classmates．考查名词单复数误用．根据第二段中的"some girls…"可知，作者是与一些同学一起去野营的，所以此处应用classmate的复数形式．
2.1ong前加a．考查冠词漏用． Distance在此为可数名词，表示一段距离，所以在long前加a．
3．去掉with．考查介词多用．Stan在此为不及物动词，意为"出发"，后面不接宾语，故with多余．
4．that→what．考查从句连接词误用．分析句子结构可知，talked about后是一个宾语从句，且从句中缺少宾语，所以用what引导该宾语从句；而that引导宾语从句时，在句中不充当任何成分．
5．takes→took．考查动词时态误用．根据时间状语last weekend可知，本文讲述过去发生的事情，该句应用一般过去时，故将takes改为took．
6．her-their．考查代词误用．本句主语为some girls，所以物主代词要用their．
7．sings→singing．考查非谓语动词误用．本句中已有谓语动词listened to，故此处应用非谓语动词形式，sing与其逆辑主语birds为主谓关系，故此处用现在分词在句中作宾语补足语，表示鸟正在唱歌．
8．quietly→quiet．考查副词和形容词混用．此处修饰名词place，应用形容词，故将quietly改为quiet．
9．much-many．考查可数名词的修饰语用错．．fishes此处指鱼不是鱼肉是可数名词其前用many．
10．or→and．考查连词误用． pleasant与exciting之间为并列关系，故将or改为and．

点评考查短文改错．
一致关系是短文改错题里常见的考点，包括时态的前后一致（例如第5题）；人称一致（例如第6题）；逻辑关系一致（例如第10题）等等．

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