Question

近年微博(microblog)在中国越来越流行。假设你是校报记者，请根据下列提示为校报写一篇介绍微博的英语短文，写作要点：

微博为我们生活所带来的的便利等优点

微博的缺点

个人观点或建议。

注意：词数80字以上；可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

 

Answer 1

Microblog has become part of our life. It is very convenient for people to express their feeling instantly at any time. Besides, it provides a chance for people to release their stress. By showing their heartfelt emotions on the microblog, their friends may also know about their condition and can offer timely comfort. However, microblog can also be potentially dangerous as it may give away people’s privacy and other significant information. All in all, microblog provides us with some concerns as well as comfort and large quantities of information, so we should be careful while using it.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。我们所要做的就是把已给中文内容翻译成英文。需要注意文中要点缺一不可。另外注意不要偏离文章中心，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合文章内容。要求句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

【亮点说明】文章使用了关联词：Besides, However,还使用了很好的短语和句子：give away 泄漏，All in all总之, provides us with提供某人某物， as well as和…也…， It is very convenient for people to express their feeling instantly at any time. it provides a chance for people to release their stress. 这两句话都用了it做形式主语， microblog provides us with some concerns as well as comfort and large quantities of information, so we should be careful while using it.这句话用了省略句。

考点：考查提纲类书面表达