Question

1．假定你是李华，最近你在当地报纸上看到一则游泳培训班的广告，称其有称职教练（instructor），一周包会．你会一点游泳，但水性不太好，想在暑假参加训练．请你写一封咨询信了解相关情况，要点如下：
1．训练的具体时间和地点．
2．条件和费用．
3．其他特别注意的事项．
注意：1．词数 100 词左右．
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
Dear Sir/Madam，
I have read your advertisement in the newspaper．You mention in it that your instructors are fully qualified and you ensure that learners will be able to swim well after one week's training．
I can swim a little but I'm not very confident in the water．So I'm interested in taking the training course during the summer holiday．I'm writing to inquire when and where the course will be given and how long it will last each day．I also want to know whether your company provides everything necessary and how much you will charge me．Besides，is there anything special that I should be prepared for？
I look forward to hearing from you soon．
Sincerely yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一封咨询游泳培训班的信．根据要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一叙述广告的内容；二描述自己的情况；三询问训练的具体时间，地点，条件和费用以及其他特别注意的事项；四表达期盼．
高分句型：
1．You mention in it that your instructors are fully qualified and you ensure that learners will be able to swim well after one week's training．句子里 第一个that 引导mention的宾语从句；第二个 that 引导ensure的宾语从句； fully qualified 表示"完全具备资格的"．
你在广告中说，你们有称职教练，一周包会．
2．I also want to know whether your company provides everything necessary and how much you will charge me．句子里I also want to know 有两个宾语从句，一是whether引导的 your company provides everything necessary，whether表示"是否"；二是how much 引导的you will charge me，how much 表示"多少钱"．
我也想知道你们公司是否提供所有必要的东西，你们收费多少．

解答 Dear Sir/Madam，
       I have read your advertisement in the newspaper．You mention in it that your instructors are fully qualified and you ensure that learners will be able to swim well after one week's training．【高分句型一】（叙述广告的内容）
      I can swim a little but I'm not very confident in the water．So I'm interested in taking the training course during the summer holiday．（描述自己的情况）I'm writing to inquire when and where the course will be given and how long it will last each day．I also want to know whether your company provides everything necessary and how much you will charge me．【高分句型二】Besides，is there anything special that I should be prepared for？（询问训练的具体时间，地点，条件和费用以及其他特别注意的事项）
I look forward to hearing from you soon．（表达期盼）
Sincerely yours，
                                                             Li Hua

点评 考查提纲类作文．
写作的步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达．
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾．
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）．