分析 本文主要讲述作者看到一位老人在银行前数钱时,一个年轻人跑过来将老人撞倒了,钱撒了一地.周围的人们很快将拾到的钱还给了老人.老人数后,一分不差.这使得作者觉得诚实比钱更重要.
解答 This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank.An old man was counting his money in the front of the bank.Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down.To make things bad,his money was lying in all direction.At once the people around rush to pick the money up,while the old man stood there,not know what to do.Surprisingly,everyone gave back the money they had just picked∧.The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed.To my great joy,there are now a lot of nice people in your life.It's true what honesty is more important than money!
详解:
1.deep改为deeply 考查副词.move是动词,要用副词修饰.
2.去掉the 考查词语用法.in front of意为"在…前面",是固定搭配.
3.bad改为worse 考查形容词比较级.根据句意:使事情更糟的是.用形容词比较级worse.
4.direction改为directions 考查名词复数.direction是可数名词,其前有all修饰时用复数形式.
5.rush改为rushed 考查动词时态.全文讲述的是已发生的事情,用一般过去时.
6.know改为knowing 考查现在分词.the old man与know之间构成主动关系,使用现在分词做状语.
7.加up 考查固定搭配.pick up意为"拾起,捡起",是固定搭配.
8.missed改为missing 考查形容词.be动词后接形容词作表语,形容词missing意为"不见了".
9.your改为our 考查代词.根据句意:在我们的生活中有许多好人.用代词our.
10.what改为that 考查连词.it是形式主语,主语从句honesty is more important than money是完整的,用连词that.
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