Question

假设你是新华中学的高三毕业生李华，刚刚参加完高考。最近听说美籍华人李响出资帮助贫困大学生。请你根据以下要点写一封资助申请信。

1．个人情况介绍；

2．申请资助原因(家庭困难情况)；

3．资助款的使用及今后打算。

注意：1．词数：120—150(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mr．Li，

I’m had to hear that you will help those who are lacking_in money in going to college．I'm writing to apply for it.__________________________________________________________

 

 

 

 

 

 

Looking forward to your reply.

 

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

Dear Mr. Li,

I'm glad to hear that you will help those who are lacking in money in going to college. I’m writing to apply for it.

My name is Li Hua, a senior three student of Xin Hua middle school. I have much financial difficulty in continuing my education to college but I’m eager to go on with my further study.

In my family my father is the only breadwinner while my mother was laid off two years ago. My grandmother has been suffering a lung illness for more than five years. My younger brother is now studying in a junior school. I took part-time jobs during the summer vacation, but what I have earned is far from enough for me to pay the required tuition fees. In order to continue my study, I have to apply for your help.

If my request is accepted, I will make good use of the money and put my heart into study and make myself a good man to society. I hope that you will consider my application.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇资助申请信类作文。假设你是新华中学的高三毕业生李华，刚刚参加完高考。最近听说美籍华人李响出资帮助贫困大学生。请你根据以下要点写一封资助申请信。要点如下1. 个人情况： 2．申请资助原因(家庭困难情况)；3．资助款的使用及今后打算。需要写的内容已经粗略给出，需要我们翻译成完整通顺的句子，适当添加些内容，使文章更充实。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。一定要给出自己的看法。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数120-150词左右，(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。

【亮点说明】1.I am glad hear that you will help those who are lacking in money. 这里含有一个宾语从句和定语从句。2.what I have earned is farm from enough for me to pay something.这里使用了主语从句和far from远非这个高级词汇

考点：资助申请信类书面表达