Question

作为一名中学生，平时你是否愿意和自己的老师交流？你认为良好的师生关系应该是什么样的？如何才能建立这种关系？请写一篇短文，就这一话题谈谈自己的看法。

注意：

1．可以使用一些具体的事例支持你的论点；

2．词数在120～150之间。

Students are becoming unwilling to confess to（承认，坦白）their teachers because

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Love and Concern Make an Ideal Relationship

Students are becoming unwilling to confess to（承认，坦白）their teachers because they are not equal in position and teachers lay too much emphasis on the study of the students.

But I am willing to share my inner thoughts with my teachers. They show love and concern for their students and are good listeners. I always find it easy to seek support and advice from them, from which I benefit and learn a lot.

In this case, an ideal relationship between teachers and students is very important. In my opinion, this relationship should be one filled with love, care, understanding, and respect, so they can exchange ideas freely. To build a relationship of this kind, teachers should become friends of students while students ought to trust their teachers and give voice to their feeling frankly. Only by joint efforts can we enjoy a warm relationship between teachers and students.

【解析】

试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语lay too much emphasis on强调；find it adj for sb to do 对某人来说。。；In this case在这种情况下；In my opinion在我看来；be filled with充满；share sth with sb 与某人分享某物；I always find it easy to seek support and advice from them, from which I benefit and learn a lot.这个句子from which引导非限制性定语从句；To build a relationship of this kind, teachers should become friends of students while students ought to trust their teachers and give voice to their feeling frankly.这个句子to do 表示目的；Only by joint efforts can we enjoy a warm relationship between teachers and students.这个句子中only +状语+部分倒装；

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