Question

19．假如你是李华，学校英文报Campus Life的编辑，在圣诞节即将到来之际，Campus Life将刊登介绍圣诞节的短文．请你给美国朋友John 写信约稿，要点如下：
1．约稿背景；
2．稿件内容；
3．稿件长度：约500词；
4．交稿日期12月20日前；
Dear John，
I am Li Hua，editor of our school newspaper Campus Life．
                                                                             
Yours，
LiHua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
With Christmas drawing near（1），more students hope to know better about（2）it．随着圣诞节的临近，越来越多的学生想要更好地了解这个节日．
（1）With Christmas drawing near随着圣诞节的来临，为with的复合结构，在句中充当时间状语；
（2）know better about对…有更好的了解．
句型二：
So I wonder if you could （1）write something about the festival and how Americans celebrate it （2）is especially welcomed．因此我想你能否写一些与这个节日有关的事，并且特别欢迎你介绍美国人如何庆祝这个节日．
（1）I wonder if you could…我想你能否…，动词wonder 后接if 引导的宾语从句，为礼貌地提出请求的句型．
（2）how Americans celebrate it 位于动词is前，为how引导的主语从句；从句为书面表达中的常见高级句型．
句型三：
I would appreciate it if （1）you could do me a favor（2）．如果你能帮忙我会非常感谢．
（1）I would appreciate it if…如果…我将非常感谢，常见的礼貌地提出请求的句型．其中it 为形式宾语，if引导了宾语从句．
（2）do sb．a favor帮某人一个忙．

解答 Dear John，
    I'm Li Hua，editor of our school newspaper Campus Life．I'm writing to ask you to write an article for our school newspaper（表明写信意图）．
    With Christmas drawing near，more students hope to know better about it【高分句型一】．Our school's English newspaper intends to introduce more knowledge about it（约稿背景）．So I wonder if you could write something about the festival and how Americans celebrate it is especially welcomed【高分句型二】（稿件内容）．As to the length，500 words or so would be fine（稿件长度）．Besides，you are supposed to send it before December 20^th so that it can be published in time（交稿日期）．I would appreciate it if you could do me a favor【高分句型三】（感谢）．
   Looking forward to hearing from you．
                                                       Yours'
                                                           Li Hua

点评 写作时首先审题要到位：审体裁、人称和时态；审要点．其次要考虑高分词语和句型的选用，从句、非谓语动词、倒装、强调句型等都是可考虑的高级句型；词语和句型的选用要包含作者的感情色彩和增强表达的气势；再次，运用关联词如besides、what's  more、moreover、for one thing …for another等，使文字更加流畅．