Question

下面短文中有10 处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每句不超过两个错误；

2. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

3. 只允许修改10 处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分。

Several days ago, our school decided to prevent students bringing their cell phones to school if they don’t pass all exams from the previously semester. Students don’t welcome this decision.They believe the cell phone is one of the greatest invention in the 20th century, that have become an important part of modern life. Therefore it is also headache for school leaders. Because many students ignore our studies and spend too much time play games, texting and using social network apps such as Wenxin or Wechat. So the leaders have to deal with the serious problem by this way.They don’t expect that something even worse.

Answer 1

1.don’t改为didn’t

2.previously改为previous

3.invention改为inventions

4.that改为which

5.therefore改为However

6.headache前加a

7.our改成their

8.play改为playing

9.by改为in

10.that去掉

【解析】

1.

2. semester是固定短语意思为上学期previous 作为形容词修饰 名词semester。而且previously作为副词，修饰名词时候要放到名词后面

3.

4.

5. 。Therefore意思是因此，起顺承作用。前文说到手机是20世纪的大发明，是现代生活的重要的一部分，而后面则说它对于学校的领导们来说也很头疼。中间是转折关系，故将therefor改为however。

6. headache。

7. many students ignore studies and spend too much time play games,因为很多学生忽略了他们的学习，花费了太多的时间玩游戏…原因在于学生忽略学习而去玩游戏，而学习，是学生的学习，不是我们的，所以用their。

8. spend sometime （in） doing something。所以play应该加上ing变成v-ing形式，而且后面一句有texting and using这应该和前面的“玩”并列。

9. this way意思是通过这种方式。全句So the leaders have to deal with the serious problem in this way.所以领导们不得不用这种方式解决这些严肃问题。In this way意思是，用这种方式。

10. even worse是宾语，不需要用that连接，expect接从句的时候后面是一个完整的句子而不是部分句子成分。故去掉that

考点：考察时态、固定搭配、词性、连接关系