Question

15．假定你是李华，你的关国网友Tom上周因妈妈感冒而缺席了很多课．就此请你用英语给他写封邮件，主要内容包括：
（1）表达看法；
（2）打听近况；
（3）给出建议．
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Tom，
I'm sorry to hear that your mother caught a cold last week．As a son，it's normal to worry about your mother when she is ill．However，it was an unwise action that you were absent from class just because of the worry．（高分句型一）
Now，I can't wait to know what's going on with your mother．（高分句型二）Has she recovered from the illness？In addition，please tell me if you have gone to school．You may have some questions about the lessons you missed．I hope you can deal with them well．
Finally，I have some suggestions to share with you．Firstly，do your own things well even though there is something that disturbs you．As you know，studying well is the best medicine for your mother．（高分句型三）Secondly，look after your mother if you have your homework finished．
Best wishes．I'm looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息用英语给网友Tom写封邮件，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：（1）表达看法；（2）打听近况；（3）给出建议． 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：worry about 担心；However然而；In addition另外；deal with 应对，处理；Finally最后；As you know正如你所知；
However，it was an unwise action that you were absent from class just because of the worry．（高分句型一）句中that是同位语从句，it在句中作形式主语
Now，I can't wait to know what's going on with your mother．（高分句型二）句中what作宾语从句
As you know，studying well is the best medicine for your mother．（高分句型三）句中as属于引导的非限制性定语从句，studying属于动名词作主语

解答 Dear Tom，
      I'm sorry to hear that your mother caught a cold last week．As a son，it's normal to worry about your mother when she is ill．However，it was an unwise action that you were absent from class just because of the worry．（高分句型一）
      Now，I can't wait to know what's going on with your mother．（高分句型二）Has she recovered from the illness？In addition，please tell me if you have gone to school．You may have some questions about the lessons you missed．I hope you can deal with them well．
      Finally，I have some suggestions to share with you．Firstly，do your own things well even though there is something that disturbs you．As you know，studying well is the best medicine for your mother．（高分句型三）Secondly，look after your mother if you have your homework finished．
      Best wishes I'm looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                 Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．