Question

3．请根据如图写一篇120-150个词的短文．你的短文应包括下列要点：
1．简要描写图画内容；
2．说明图画含义；
3．表达你的观点．

Answer 1

分析 考查看图作文写作．本文的主题是Too Much Care Spoils a Child；过多给孩子的宠爱会毁掉孩子的未来，讲述的是现在社会上存在的过度溺爱孩子的现象，导致孩子们不懂关爱，不懂如何与人交往．我们应该让孩子自己做自己能够做的事情，开心的成长．要求考生有很强的审题能力，能根据图表在脑海里勾勒出故事发生的始末，考生的思维量是非常大的．然后根据图表内容组织要点，要注意要点的完整性，不能有遗漏．要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：As is shown in the picture above，the blooming plant is being destroyed by overwatering．句中使用了as引导的非限制性定语从句；They are doing all these without knowing that they are actually spoiling us．句中 that为宾语从句；Only in this way can we become stronger to shoulder our due responsibilities．句中使用了倒装句

解答 Too Much Care Spoils a Child
      As is shown in the picture above，the blooming plant is being destroyed by overwatering．（高分句型） Often people do things with good intentions，but the result may be quite different．Such can also be the case with us while we grow up．
      To spare us the kind of hardships they had in their childhood，our parents tend to offer us too much care，for example，making beds，washing clothes and even carrying school bags for us．（高分句型）They are doing all these without knowing that they are actually spoiling us．As children，what we really need is to experience difficulties and take challenges so that we can learn from our own mistakes and grow to be independent．（高分句型） Only in this way can we become stronger to shoulder our due responsibilities．（高分句型）

点评 看图作文要求考生将画面所包含的有效信息直接运用英语思维转换成英语语言文字，再根据这些要点谋篇布局．要求考生把看到的图画用文字表达出来，除了能表达清楚图画中的信息外，考生还需要根据词数要求，适当拓展并发挥想象，从而使文章的叙述不单调．如果是记叙文类的写作素材，考生要注意故事的时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、过程、结果这六个要素；如果是说明文或议论文，考生则首先要对图画的内容进行描述，然后围绕图画的信息进行说明或议论．此时考生一定要注意把握图画的中心思想，写出图画要反映的内容．