Question

7．下面短文中有10处语言错误．请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词．
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分． 例如：
Last Saturday I went to the Great Wall with some of my friends．In our way up，we saw many volunteers working in the sun．They helped the elders with their bags，took photos for some tourist and answered people's questions．Because they were very tired，they didn't stop to have a rest．
Just at the moment，we saw a little boy standing alone，cried．We went over and asked wh at is the matter．From his answer we knew he couldn't find his mother．We told him not to worry and then we tried to get in the touch with his mother with the phone number he gave us．Twenty minutes late，his mother turned up．When she saw her son，she got relieved but thanked us again and again．
That day we not only enjoyed the beauty of the Great Wall，but felt the warm of the society．If everyone can reach a helping hand to others，the world will be more harmonious．

Answer 1

分析 文章讲述了作者和朋友去长城玩，路上遇到一个小朋友和自己的妈妈走散了．在作者和朋友的一起努力下，帮助小朋友找了妈妈．如果每个人都能在别人困难时伸出援助之手，那么我们的世界将更加和谐．

解答 Last Saturday I went to the Great Wall with some of my friends．In our way up，we saw many
                                                                                              On
volunteers working in the sun．They helped the elders with their bags，took photos for some tourist 
                                                                                                                                        tourists
and answered people's questions．Because they were very tired，they didn't stop to have a rest．
                                             Although/Though/While
Just at the moment，we saw a little boy standing alone，cried．We went over and asked what is the
                                                                                   crying                                            was
matter．From his answer we knew he couldn't find his mother．We told him not to worry and then

we tried to get in the touch with his mother with the phone number he gave us．Twenty minutes
                        去掉
late，his mother turned up．When she saw her son，she got relieved but thanked us again and again．
Later                                                                                             and
That day we not only enjoyed the beauty of the Great Wall，but felt the warm of the society．If
                                                                                                         warmth
everyone can reach∧a helping hand to others，the world will be more harmonious．
                          加out
1．In改为On．短语搭配，on one's way to去某地的路上．
2．tourist改为tourists．题干中前面有some修饰，tourist是可数名词，要用复数．
3．Because改为Although/Though/While．句意表示的是让步关系，尽管他们很累，但仍然没有休息．
4．cried改为crying．题干中，前面是一个完整的句子，没有连词，cry要用非谓语动词作伴随状语，cry与the little boy是主动关系，要用现在分词．
5．is改为was．文章讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
6．the去掉．短语搭配，get in touch with sb和某人取得联系．
7．late改为later．late迟到的，later多久后，常和时间段连用．
8．but改为and．句意表达的是承接关系，不是转折．
9．warm改为warmth．题干中warm是用来作felt的宾语，而且前面有the，后面有介词of，说明要用名词．
10．加out．短语搭配，reach out伸出．reach表示的是到达的意思．

点评 短文改错题考查学生的语篇理解和语言运用能力．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数）；动词（时态，语态，搭配）；代词（不定代词，人称代词）；形容词和副词（转化）；连词（and，but，or）；冠词（an，a，the）等．解题时，要把握好句子结构，以动词为中心．动词和与动词有关的错误在短文改错中占很大的比例．