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2．It was my birthday last year．Every year，my parents prepared abirthday giftfor me．So that day I was expecting a birthday gift，too．After I came back from school，I sawmy motherwatching TV in the sitting room．
"Mom，where is my birthday gift？"I asked．Hearin g that，my mother looked up at me．She looked surprised．Then she said，"Sorry，I totally forgot it's your birthda y today．I haven't got a birthday gift for you．"I was very sadto hear that．I went to my room and shut the door．
About half an hour later，my mother came and knocked on the door．She told me supper was ready．
"Come out to eat quickly，"she said as if nothing had happened．After I went out，I saw my mother and father sitting at the table．I came to the table，unhappy．
"So how is everything going in school？"while eating，my father asked．
"Nothing special，"I said in a low voice．
   After supper，my father said，"Let's go out and enjoy a ride．"
   I wasn't in a good mood，so I said，"I don't feel like going anywhere．"
   My father smiled and said，"Follow me．You won't get disappointed．"
   Looking at the smile on my father's face，I suddenly cheered up．I was sure my parents had prepared a surprise for me．So I followed．
   Then we went out of the house and got onmy father's car．I thought they were taking me to the downtown area to get a birthday gift or watch a show at a theater．
However，after a while，I realized we were not heading to the downtown area．Instead，we were going in the opposite direction．I became very curious．About half an hour later，my father stopped the car on a farm．The owner of the farm came out to greet us．The air was sweet and warm．There were many goats there．The farmer's daughter gave me a baby goatto hold．I suddenly knew it was my birthday gift．
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150词左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语．
Paragraph 1：
The other day，while I was reading a book，I looked at a picture of a baby goat．      ．
Paragraph 2：
I held the baby goat in my arms and touched it．      ．

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）Then I realized that she actually decided to get me one for my birthday when she heard that．
该句使用了that引导的宾语从句，放在realize后面；when引导一个时间状语从句；
（高分句型二）I couldn't think of a better birthday gift，which was really a big surprise．
couldn't和better否定词和比较级连用，表示最高级；which引导一个非限制性定语从句；
注意在续写时，首先确定时态为一般过去时，并要体现文章中划线的关键词，最后要突出续写的主题．

解答 The other day，while I was reading a book，I looked at a picture of a baby goat．The baby goatlooked so lovely that I wanted to own one．After reading the book，I told my motherthat I wanted to raise a baby goat．However，my mother didn't say anything when she heard that．（高分句型一）Then I realized that she actually decided to get me one for my birthday when she heard that．
     I held the baby goat in my arms and touched it．My mother asked me whether I liked it，and I immediately nodded．（高分句型二）I couldn't think of a better birthday gift，which was really a big surprise．Later，we drove back with the baby goat．Since then I have kept it in the garden of our house．Each time I see it，I know how much my parentslove me!

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