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2．假设你叫李华，你的美国好友James打算来福建旅游，发来邮件向你询问武夷山的情况．请你根据以下提示给他回一封电子邮件．
要点：（1）位于福建省西北部．（2）风景优美，气候宜人．（3）众多著名景点和奇特的中式建筑．
注意：（1）词数100左右．（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
Dear James，
I'm glad to hear that you are visiting FuJian for your winter holiday．I am writing to tell you more about Wu Yi Mountain．Located in the northwest of FuJian Province，it is a wonderful tourist attraction．（高分句型一）The weather there is mild in summer．What is more important is that it is most famous as a holy tourist site．（高分句型二）Not only can you appreciate the impressive scenery，but you can also learn more about the culture of it．（高分句型三）Wu Yi Mountain，which is famous for many places of interests，has a good number of fantastic Chinese buildings．（高分句型四）
There is no doubt that a trip to Wu Yi Mountain will be a truly unforgetable experience．（高分句型五）I wish you a nice trip!
                                                                                                                                                                                                                               Yours Sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      LiHua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息给美国好友James回一封电子邮件，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：（1）位于福建省西北部．（2）风景优美，气候宜人．（3）众多著名景点和奇特的中式建筑． 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：tourist attraction旅游胜地；not only，but also，不仅，而且；be famous for因为…而出名
Located in the northwest of FuJian Province，it is a wonderful tourist attraction．（高分句型一）
What is more important is that it is most famous as a holy tourist site．（高分句型二）
Not only can you appreciate the impressive scenery，but you can also learn more about the culture of it．（高分句型三）
Wu Yi Mountain，which is famous for many places of interests，has a good number of fantastic Chinese buildings．（高分句型四）
 There is no doubt that a trip to Wu Yi Mountain will be a truly unforgetable experience．（高分句型五）

解答 Dear James，
     I'm glad to hear that you are visiting FuJian for your holiday．I am writing to tell you more about Wu Yi Mountain．
     Located in the northwest of FuJian Province，it is a wonderful tourist attraction．（高分句型一）The weather there is mild in summer．What is more important is that it is most famous as a holy tourist site．（高分句型二）Not only can you appreciate the impressive scenery，but you can also learn more about the culture of it．（高分句型三）Wu Yi Mountain，which is famous for many places of interests，has a good number of fantastic Chinese buildings．（高分句型四）
     There is no doubt that a trip to Wu Yi Mountain will be a truly unforgetable experience．（高分句型五）I wish you a nice trip!
                                                                                                                                                                                Yours Sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                  Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．