Question

1．假设你是李华，想通过希望工程为一名山村儿童提供一定的经济援助．请给相关部门写一封信，请他们帮助选择一位合适人选（candidate）．信的内容应包括以下要点：
1．帮助对象应符合的情况．
2．资助计划如何具体实施
注意：1．词数不少于120；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头已为你写好，不计入总词数．
To whom it may concern，
I'm Li Hua，a student from Tieyi High School．                                              ．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息通过希望工程为一名山村儿童提供一定的经济援助．给相关部门写一封信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：帮助对象应符合的情况；资助计划如何具体实施  2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态； 4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：I'm writing to tell you that I wish to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial assistance to a child in a remote area．（高分句型一）句中使用that引导的宾语从句
 I wonder if it is convenient for you to take the following into consideration．（高分句型二）句中if是意思是"是否"，引导的是宾语从句
On the one hand，I will send 50 yuan to him/her every month until he/she finishes his/her junior middle school．On the other hand，I plan to teach the child math and English in person during my vacations．（高分句型三）句中使用了on the one hand；on the other hand"一方面；另一方面"

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
     I'm Li Hua，a student from Tieyi High School．I'm writing to tell you that I wish to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial assistance to a child in a remote area．（高分句型一） Could you please recommend a proper candidate？
     I wonder if it is convenient for you to take the following into consideration．（高分句型二）First，the child should come from Gansu Province，for I expect to help a child from my hometown．Second，it will be better if the child is in Grade One．I hope I will help him/her from the very beginning．
     My plan will be carried out as follows．On the one hand，I will send 50 yuan to him/her every month until he/she finishes his/her junior middle school．On the other hand，I plan to teach the child math and English in person during my vacations．（高分句型三）
     I am looking forward to your early reply．Thank you．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                      Best regards，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                          Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．