Question

18．假定你是李华，英国一个学生代表团将来你校进行访问，你们计划举办一个联欢会（a get together），请向对方负责人Jack写信，告知联欢会活动安排，并征求对方意见．联欢会活动安排如下：
（1）中国学生表演节目
（2）英国学生表演节目
（3）中英两国学生共同参与一个节目或活动．（询问有何建议）
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Jack，
We feel very honored  that we will have you here as our guestsNow I'd like to inform you of some of our arrangements for your visit and ask for your opinions of them．
We are going to have a get together at which performances will be given．（高分句型一）Of course，we Chinese students will perform some Chinese dances and music，but we don't think the get-together will be complete without your taking part．（高分句型二）So，would you mind giving some performances，too？Further more．we think there should be a performance or an activity in which both Chinese students and British students will act together．（高分句型三）What do you think of the idea？I wonder if you could make some suggestions．
I'm looking forward to your early reply．Yours，
Li  Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息向对方负责人Jack写信，告知联欢会活动安排，并征求对方意见，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：（1）中国学生表演节目（2）英国学生表演节目（3）中英两国学生共同参与一个节目或活动．（询问有何建议）2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：
We are going to have a get together at which performances will be given．（高分句型一）句中带有介词+which引导的定语从句
Of course，we Chinese students will perform some Chinese dances and music，but we don't think the get-together will be complete without your taking part．（高分句型二）句中Chinese students作we的同位语
Further more．we think there should be a performance or an activity in which both Chinese students and British students will act together．（高分句型三）句中带有介词+which引导的定语从句

解答 Dear Jack，
     We feel very honored that we will have you here as our guests．Now I'd like to inform you of some of our arrangements for your visit and ask for your opinions of them．
      We are going to have a get together at which performances will be given．（高分句型一）Of course，we Chinese students will perform some Chinese dances and music，but we don't think the get-together will be complete without your taking part．（高分句型二）So，would you mind giving some performances，too？Further more．we think there should be a performance or an activity in which both Chinese students and British students will act together．（高分句型三）What do you think of the idea？I wonder if you could make some suggestions．
      I'm looking forward to your early reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                             Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                             Li  Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．