Question

目前，青少年追星成为一个非常普遍的现象。有些青少年对偶像崇拜(celebrity worship)近乎痴迷。请你就青少年追星这一话题写一篇英语短文。要点包括：

1. 你如何看待青少年追星这一现象； 2. 青少年追星对其自身有何影响。

注意：

1.可适当增加细节，以使内容完整充实。2. 词数： 120 左右。

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

one possible version:

These days probably every teenager in the world has a poster of someone they worship stuck on their wall. For some teens, celebrity worship is simply a part of maturing and entering the adolescent world. There is nothing to worry about. Celebrities who promote ethical behavior and make responsible personal decisions can have a positive effect on teenagers. But for some teenagers who develop an unhappy obsession with a celebrity, parents and teachers should pay a lot of attention. They are so obsessed with celebrities that they cannot concentrate on their studies. They expect to live like a celebrity so that they often do something impractical.

While it is normal for teenagers to idolize some celebrities, parents should take action if they suspect a teen is too obsessed with celebrities and becoming indifferent to school. They should encourage their children to become involved with school activities. Also, I think the celebrities should set a good example of how to live and act to have positive effects on their fans.

【解析】

试题分析：本文的话题是青少年追星。要点包括：1. 你如何看待青少年追星这一现象；2. 青少年追星对其自身有何影响。还有词数的要求是120 左右。认真阅读并分析可知，这是一篇议论文，要求我们说明一个现象，应该用一般现在时；发表个人观点则应该用表达个人看法的词或短语，如I think等。注意长短句结合，注意人称和时态等的一致性。还有尽可能用比较高级的词汇和表达，和句子之间的连贯性。

【亮点说明】本文分两段说明青少年追星现象和影响以及个人观点，层次分明，内容清晰。在文中使用who引导的定语从句和so…that/so that结构，和have sb. do句式。运用的短语有have a positive effect on，be so obsessed with，concentrate on，become involved with等。While 和Also等连词的运用使句子之间的连贯性增强了。

考点：提纲作文。