分析 本文主要讲述作者在回家的路上看到一栋建筑物着火了,打电话报警后,消防员很快扑灭了大火.但突然一名外国妇女跑来说她女儿还在建筑物里.但消防员们听不懂,最后,作者将这些告诉了消防员,他们救出了那个小女孩.
解答 One day when I was on my way to home from school,I found a building on fire.Immediately I called the firefighters.
Several minutes lately,the firefighters arrived and tried their best to control the fire.With the help of the firefighters,a lot of peoples left the building safely.Sudden a foreign woman came in a hurry to tell the firefighters everything.But they can't understand what she said.I went to the woman and asked her that was happening.She told me that his daughter was still in the building.I told the firefighters about it at once.They immediately run into the building and rescued∧little girl.
详解:
1.去掉to 考查介词.home意为"回家",是副词,其前不加介词to.
2.lately改为later 考查副词.later用于一段具体时间之后,表示从过去或将来算起的多长时间以后,但通常不指从现在算起的多久以后.
3.peoples改为people 考查词语用法.people指"人"时,是集合名词,本身就是复数形式,不需要加s表示复数.
4.Sudden改为Suddenly 考查副词.修饰句子要用副词,形容词sudden的副词是suddenly.
5.everything改为something 根据句意:告诉消防员一些事情.用something.
6.can't 改为couldn't 考查动词时态.全文讲述的是过去的事情,用一般过去时态.
7.that改为what 考查代词.分析句子结构,句中缺少主语,用what作主语,同时引导宾语从句.
8.his改为her 考查代词.her指代the woman.
9.run改为ran 考查动词时态.全文讲述的是过去的事情,用一般过去时态.
10.加the 考查冠词.前文已提到过她的女儿,此处little girl前加定冠词the表示特指.
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