Question

11．据报道，在我国仍有很多山区的孩子因为家庭贫穷而上不起学．你们班就如何帮助这些孩子上学进行了讨论．假如你是李华，请你把你们的建议写成一封信寄给Teens，希望他们能够呼吁更多的人参与这项活动．
内容要点：
1．收集旧课本和衣服；
2．呼吁更多人帮助他们；
3．你的建议，至少一条．
注意：1．词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Editor，
I'm a senior high school student．
            ．
Yours sincerely，Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们给Teens主编写一封信，呼吁更多的人帮助山区的孩子上学，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：收集旧课本和衣服；呼吁更多人帮助他们；你的建议．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为作者写此信的意图．第二部分为帮助山区的孩子上学的具体建议．
重点短语与句型：
appeal to  呼吁
care for关心
As far as I'm concerned就我而言
Above all尤其，最重要的是
高分句型一：It's reported that in China many children in mountainous areas still can't go to school because of poverty．此句用了it is V-ed that…"据报道"句型．
高分句型二：Above all，we should give them respect，never looking down upon them because they are poor．此句现在分词作伴随状语

解答 Dear Editor，
    I'm a senior high school student．It's reported that in China many children in mountainous areas still can't go to school because of poverty（高分句型一）．Last week，our class held a discussion about how to help them to go to school and live a happy childhood．（作者写此信的意图）
    Here are our suggestions．First，some old textbooks and clothes can be collected and sent to those children so that they can be reused by them．Second，it's also very important to appeal to more people and social organizations to help and care for those poor children．As far as I'm concerned，we should save some of our pocket money and give it to those children in need．Above all，we should give them respect，never looking down upon them because they are poor．（高分句型二）We'll really appreciate it if you can，through the English Weekly，increase public awareness of the poor children's living conditions and call on more people to help them．（帮助山区的孩子上学的具体建议）
                                                                                                                                                                                                            Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                 Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．