Question

【题目】文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一个横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。

Last week, my parents and I took a two-days trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows，it’s famous mountain with varieties of plants and animals. The weather was fine. It was about noon that we arrived at the foot of the mountain，the three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain，we watched monkeys，visiting temples and told stories. On the way up, I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautifully. Time passes quickly. Evening came. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】two-days --- two-day

【2】加 a

【3】that—when

【4】them—us

【5】visiting—visited

【6】picture—pictures

【7】beautifully—beautiful

【8】passes—passed

【9】and—but

【10】删at

【解析】

试题分析：上星期，我和父母花了两天到四川峨眉山旅行。我们爬了山，参观了寺庙。拍照。晚上我们在山顶的一间酒店过夜。

【1】句意：上星期，我和父母花了两天到四川峨眉山旅行。两天的旅行，需用形容词，故two-days—two-day。

【2】句意：大家都知道，它是一座有多种动植物的名山。可数名词前表泛指，用不定冠词，故famous前加 a。

【3】句意：当我们到达山脚下时，时间约是中午时分。此处应该是时间状语从句，故that—when。

【4】句意：我们三人都非常激动。由上下文可知是作者和父母“我们三人”， 故them—us。

【5】句意：当我们爬上了山顶，我们观看猴子，参观寺庙，讲故事。由句义可知，此处是三个并列的动作，故visiting—visited。

【6】句意：途中，因为风景如此漂亮，我忙着拍了许多照片。由句义可知，拍了许多照片，故picture—pictures。

【7】句意：因为风景如此漂亮。此处应该是形容词做表语，故beautifully—beautiful。

【8】句意：时间过得很快。由上下文可知作者记述的是过去的事情，故passes—passed。

【9】句意：食物很贵，但是服务很好。此处应是表示转折，所以and—but。

【10】句意：我是那么累，以至于头一碰到枕头就睡着了。此处the moment是名词短语引导时间状语从句，删at。