Question

8．假设你是红星中学李津，你的美国笔友John发来邮件，他对天津流行的一种共享单 车"mobike"很感兴趣，并希望你能简单介绍．请你根据以下提示，给John写一封回信． 要点包括：
1．使用方便（APP査看车辆，扫二维码开锁）
2．容易找到 便于存车
3．其它优点（该部分内容自拟至少两点）
注意：短文字数不少于100词
参考词汇：
             智能手机 smart phone 
              扫二维码  scan the QR Code
Dear John，
I'm writing to tell you more about the new form of sharing bike mobike mentioned in your latest letter．
It's very convenient to use if you have a smart phone．What you do is to find a nearest mobike through the APP，scan the QR code on the bike，and enjoy your trip．Compared to other forms of sharing bike，the greatest advantage of mobike is that you can easily find one and never worry about where to park it．It is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation，which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well．
Hope to ride a mobike with you in China．
Yours，
Li Jin．

Answer 1

分析 本文属于提纲作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
亮点句型一：What you do is to find a nearest mobike through the APP，scan the QR code on the bike，and enjoy your trip．你要做的是通过APP找到最近MOBIKE、扫描QR码在自行车上，享受您的旅行．What you do 是一个主语从句，从句中缺少宾语，用what来引导．what在从句中做宾语．
亮点句型二：It is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation，which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well．作为一种交通工具，它不仅缓解了交通压力，而且对环境也有好处．这是一个非限制性定语从句，which指代前面整个句子的内容，在从句中做主语．

解答 Dear John，
     I'm writing to tell you more about the new form of sharing bike mobike mentioned in your latest letter．
     It's very convenient to use if you have a smart phone．What you do is to find a nearest mobike through the APP，scan the QR code on the bike，and enjoy your trip．（亮点句型一）Compared to other forms of sharing bike，the greatest advantage of mobike is that you can easily find one and never worry about where to park it．It is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation，which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well．（亮点句型二）
     Hope to ride a mobike with you in China．
Yours，
Li Jin

点评 语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．