Question

5．假如你叫王平，根据图表提示，给你的加拿大网友Smith 写一封信，介绍你的寒假生活（共20天），可根据自己的实际情况添加细节．
注意：1．词数：100左右； 2．开头已经给出，不计入总词数．

Dear Smith，
How are you？How time flies!Now the winter vacation was over and I have come back to school again．
                                                                  
Yours，
Wang Ping．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达是一篇图画类的写作，要求考生按图片所示向笔友介绍寒假生活．要仔细观察分析图画的画面，按照图意写作．并且写作时注意句子的衔接，适当使用连词．同时考生还要注意的是在写作过程中所运用的时态要以一般过去时为主．除此以外，要注意写作过程中注意使用平时学到的短语和句型，注意行文的连贯和逻辑性．
重要短语：
 work out，解决，In a word，总之
高分句子：
1．It took me nearly a week to visit my relatives and attend family parties，as it is a traditional custom in China．本句含有重要句式 it takes sb．sometime to do，花费某人时间做某事．
2．and everything that helped to recover my energy．此句that引导的定语从句，修饰everything．

解答 Dear Smith，
    How are you？How time flies!Now the winter vacation was over and I have come back to school again．（问候）
    We had 20 days in all for the holiday，during which we had the most important Chinese Festival-the Spring Festival．It took me nearly a week to visit my relatives and attend family parties，as it is a traditional custom in China．（高分句型）Of course，I spent most of the time doing my lessons．As you know，I will take the National Examinations in June and it's only a few months away．Every day I did some English reading，practiced writing compositions，worked out a number of science problems and so on．When I got tired，I would do something to relax myself，like playing basketball with my friends，listening to music，surfing the Internet，playing games，and everything that helped to recover my energy．
（描述寒假生活）
    In a word，I had a full，busy and wonderful holiday．How about you？I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon．（期待回信）
Yours，
Wang Ping

点评 在完成图表作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样才可以更好的驾驭．同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，