Question

19．假如你是新华中学的高一学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom给你发电子邮件，询问你对高中生活的感受和你对新的一年的打算．请根据以下要点给他回封邮件．
1．对高中生活的感受；
2．对新的一年的打算（如学习，交友，感恩父母等）．
注意：1．词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯．
                                       

Answer 1

分析 题目要求根据要求写一篇书信要求：1．对高中生活的感受；2．对新的一年的打算（如学习交友，感恩父母等）．需要注意的有：1．词数：100词左右；开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．需要根据要求写，还要注意使用多种句式和高级词汇，并添加关联词让行文流畅．
【亮点说明】本篇书面表达使用了三段式的结构，开门见山，运用平常的词语却写的新颖，别致，内容丰富．让人产生联想，简单易懂，虽然不华丽，却很朴实．没有过多的空话．文章运用了一般现在时和将来时穿插．用了很多语法知识，运用了第一人陈为主的叙述顺序．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：
It has been half a year since I became a senior one student．（高分句型一）
I'm also fond of the learning environment here，where we can compete and learn from each other．（高分句型二）
What upsets me is that although I have tried my best to study hard，I still find it hard to catch up with my classmates．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Tom，
      How is everything going on with you？It has been half a year since I became a senior one student．（高分句型一） I feel it an honor to be a student here，because there are many excellent teachers and outstanding students．I'm also fond of the learning environment here，where we can compete and learn from each other．（高分句型二）What upsets me is that although I have tried my best to study hard，I still find it hard to catch up with my classmates．（高分句型三）I'm especially poor in English，so in the coming new year，I'll study harder．In addition，I'll learn to share housework with my parents who give all their love and care to me．
      I am looking forward to hearing from you．Wish you happy!
                                                                                                                                                                                                               Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．