Question

11．某英语报社开辟了中学生习作专栏．本期的话题是：注重日常学习、工作和生活中的细节，因为细节往往决定成败．请你以"We Should Pay Much Attention to Details"为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈自己的一些看法．
注意：
1．词数120左右；  
2．短文中不能出现本人相关信息．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇开放式作文，写作时不仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题．
亮点句型一：Some people may think that one who wants to achieve great success shouldn't pay much attention to details．有些人认为想取得巨大成功的人不应该太在意细节．这句话用了定语从句who wants to achieve great success，先行词是one．
亮点句型二：But sometimes it is the details that determine our success，for they may be the very thing that has a great impact on what we're doing．但有时是细节决定了我们的成功，因为他们可能是对我们正在做的事情有很大影响．这句话用了it做形式主语，真正的主语是that determine our success；that has a great impact on what we're doing是定语从句，修饰先行词thing，在这个定语从句中what we're doing是介词on的宾语从句．

解答 We should Pay Much Attention to Details
   Some people may think that one who wants to achieve great success shouldn't pay much attention to details．（亮点句型一）But sometimes it is the details that determine our success，for they may be the very thing that has a great impact on what we're doing．（亮点句型二）Since we have realized the importance of details，what should we do？First，we should form the habit of being careful，because a careful person will rarely overlook details．What's more，we should learn to keep t he balance of quantity and quality．We may find that when faced with lots of work，the faster we do it，the more mistakes we will make．Why？Because when we work at high speed，the only thing we care about is quantity in which case we are more likely to neglect the details．
   As far as I'm concerned，we should keep it in mind that quality comes first，without which quantity is of no significance．

点评 考查开放性作文写作，开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示．给考生自由发挥的余地较大．对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力．在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭．同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性．