Question

13．高考在即，你在班上做了一个题为"报考省内大学还是省外大学"的调查，了解同学们在填报高考志愿时的一些想法．以下你所在班级的同学的观点：

	赞成报考省内大学	赞成报考省外大学
比例	75%	25%
理由	1．离父母较近，可以得到他们及时的照顾； 2．气候、生活方式和饮食习惯等没有大的区别； 3．大学毕业后在省内找工作相对较容易．	1．锻炼独立生活的能力； 2．结交来自五湖四海的朋友；体验异地风土人情； 3．毕业后留在省外工作，获得更大的发展空间．

【写作内容】
请根据以上信息，写一篇英语短文，反映你班上同学的观点．内容包括：
1．班上同学持两种观点的比例；
2．支持每种观点的理由；
【写作要求】1．只能用5个句子表达全部内容．2．文章开头已给出，不计入总词数．
           Recently，I conducted a survey among my classmates on whether to enter a university in our own province or in other provinces．
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
75% of the respondents are for the opinion that we should enter a university in our own province，saying that while living close to parents，we can get timely care and support from them．百分之75的受访者赞同说应该报考本省大学，并且说当和父母住的近的时候，我们可以得到他们及时的照顾及支持．
高分句型二：
What's more，it is helpful if we choose to work in a anther province after graduation，which provides bigger room for our own development．除此以外，在省外上学对我们大学毕业后工作的选择有很大的帮助，那样会给我们自身的发展提供更广阔的空间．
句型一 ①that we should enter a university in our own province…该句是一个由that引导的同位语从句，that在句中不作句子成分
           ②saying that while living close to parents…此处是现在分词短语作伴随状语
句型二 which provides bigger room for our own development 该句是一个由which引导的非限制性定语从句，which在句中充当主语，替代前面整个句子的内容．
本文还有以下重要短语和固定用法：as well as 和    what's more 除此以外

解答 Recently，I conducted a survey among my classmates on whether to enter a university in local province or in other provinces．（提出观点）75% of the respondents are for the opinion that we should enter a university in our own province，saying that while living close to parents，we can get timely care and support from them．（高分句型一）They also hold that the climate，life style and eating habits differ little from what we are having now，so it won't be difficult to fit in there．It is specially pointed out that it may help in some way if we prefer to find a job within our province after graduation．However，the rest 25% approve of entering a university in other provinces，arguing that as well as being able to cultivate our ability to live independently，we can still seize the chance to make friends of different backgrounds and from different parts of our country and to experience various customs and traditions．What's more，it is helpful if we choose to work in a anther province after graduation，which provides bigger room for our own development．（高分句型二）

点评 本书面表达为提纲类，写作要点已给出，考生在写作时应使用正确的衔接词将前后句联系起来．该作文要求用5个句子表达完全，这就要求考生英语语法功底深厚，使用各类从句，才能更好的将文章阐述清楚．