Question

4．假定你是李华，得知你的美国笔友Jack由于父母工作的需求，刚刚转入一所新的学校，面对陌生的学习环境，他特别不适应，觉得孤独，焦虑．请你给他写一封邮件，表达你对此事的看法，并提出两到三个切实可行的建议，帮助他尽早适应新环境．
注意：1）词数100左右；2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Jack，
I'm very sorry to hear that you feel lonely and anxious because you have just moved and studied in a new school．．
Yours，
Lihua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇开放式作文，写作时不仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题．
亮点句型一：I'm very sorry to hear that you feel lonely and anxious because you have just moved and studied in a new school我很抱歉听到你感到孤独和焦虑，因为你刚刚搬到一所新学校学习．本句是个复合句，句中that you feel lonely and anxious because you have just moved and studied in a new school是一个宾语从句，在宾语从句中because引导的是原因状语从句．
亮点句型二：Then，you'd better take every chance to express yourself in class，which will help your teachers and classmates have a better understanding of you．然后，你最好在课堂上抓住每一个机会来表达自己的想法，这样你的老师和同学会更好地理解你．本句中which引导的是一个非限制性定语从句，which指代前面整个句子的内容．

解答 Dear Jack，
I'm very sorry to hear that you feel lonely and anxious because you have just moved and studied in a new school．（亮点句型一）But you needn't worry，for it is quite normal to have such a feeling in completely new surroundings．I have some suggestions for you to make things go better．
To begin with，it would be a good idea to communicate with your new teachers and classmates willingly and actively．You have to get over your shyness．Then，you'd better take every chance to express yourself in class，which will help your teachers and classmates have a better understanding of you．（亮点句型二）Besides，joining your classmates in doing after-class activities is surely helpful for you to make new friends．
I believe you will soon become adapted to everything in the new school and become happy again!
Yours，
LiHua

点评 考查开放性作文写作，开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示．给考生自由发挥的余地较大．对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力．在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭．同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性．