Question

假设你是李华，请根据下表提示给你的笔友Jack写信，向他介绍你的两位朋友刘伟和张达休假计划，并顺便征询Jack对你的休假有何建议。

刘伟	张达	李华
上网、听音乐、看电视	读书
游泳、打网球	社会公益活动	还没有决定； 请对方提建议
做家务	旅游、参观梦想大学

注意：1. 词数：120左右；

2. 文章的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Jack,

I am writing to tell you about my friends? plans for the holidays.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear jack,

I am writing to tell you about my friends’ plans for the holidays. What they play to do is as follows:

Liu Wei plans to surf the Internet to learn what’s going on both at home and abroad. To relax himself, he is going to listen to his favorite music and watch some games that are televised live. Weather permitting, he will go swimming or play tennis with his friends. In order to reduce his parents’ burden, he plans to do some housework as well.

Zhang Da’s first choice is to do some reading. He also means to visit the old people’s home, showing love and care to the old. He is going to travel and visit his dream university at the end of his holiday.

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求根据提示给笔友Jack写一封信，向他介绍两位朋友刘伟和张达的休假计划，并顺便征询Jack的建议。写作要点包括：刘伟的休假计划；张达的休假计划；请Jack给一些建议这三个方面。词数在120词左右，开头和结尾不计入总词数；不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观；注意行文的连贯性。

亮点说明：范文涵盖了所有的写作要点，进行了适当的拓展，并注意语句的连贯性；范文还使用了主语从句、宾语从句、定语从句、非谓语动词等语法知识，具备较强的语言运用能力。

语法方面：主语从句What they play to do；宾语从句what’s going on both at home and abroad；定语从句that are televised live；非谓语动词to relax himself, weather permitting, showing love and care to the old等，语法知识运用娴熟，显示了较强的语法功底，也使作文句式变得多样；

篇章结构方面：范文注意使用to relax himself, and, weather permitting, or, as well, also等来衔接句子和段落，使表达变得更有条理；

短语和搭配方面：范文使用了plan to do, listen to, in order to, as well, do some reading, mean to do, at the end of等短语和搭配，使作文的内容变得充实。

考点：材料类作文