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3．Nowadays，a brand new way of shopping is attracting increasing customers：online group buying，also known as collective buying，which offers products and services at reduced prices on the condition that a minimum number of buyers would make the purchase．Origins of group buying can be traced to China where group buying or team buying was executed to get discount prices when a large group of people were willing to buy the same item
 China group buying transaction volume hit US$ 1.74 billion （RMB 11 billion） in 2011，up 550% from the same period in 2010，according to a report by Tuan800．com，the Beijing-based daily deal sites aggregator．The report also shows that 2011 was the year that the Chinese Group-buying market got more and more concentrated with more and more Chinese，most of whom are white collars，teenagers and college students enjoying the benefits of group buying．And，among the most favorable buying categories are restaurant，movie and hotel booking for travelling．
    Through group buying，on one hand，customers get a lower price than normal．On the other hand，businessmen also cut down expenses on marketing．That is the reason why group buying websites spring up like mushrooms in recent months．What is the most attractive in group buying must be the unbelievable discounts．Facing the discounts，customers always couldn't resist the impulse to buy the products，even though they do not need them．
[写作内容]
1． 以约30个词概括短文的要点．
2． 以约120个词写一篇关于"团购"的短文，至少包括以下的内容要点．
（1）你对团购的看法并陈述理由．
（2）谈谈你自己或他人的一次团购经历．
（3）请你给团购者一些有用的建议．
[写作要求]
1．作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，或其他论述方法，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子．
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称．
[评分标准]
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语句连贯．

Answer 1

分析 本文是读写任务型写作，这类作文可按照三段式模板写：第一段：概况所给短文要点．第二段：过渡词引出主题句---阐述理由．第三段：个人观点．特别要注意第一段的概括．用自己的语言概括，不能照搬照抄原文． 时态用一般现在时．人称用第一和第三人称． 重要短语：the concept of （…的概念），become popular in（在…变得受欢迎），result from（由…产生），from one's point of view（某人认为），cooperate with（与…合作），at the lowest price （以最低的价钱），on a large scale（大规模的），as well as （和，又，也），as for（关于），reliable websites（可信赖的网站），avoid doing（避免做某事），be cheated by（被欺骗）．
【高分句型一】
1．Group buying developed rapidly and became more and more popular in China，resulting from the discounts given．
此处是由现在分词短语"resulting from…"作原因状语，主句为"Group buying developed rapidly and became more and more popular in China"．
【高分句型二】
2．For one thing，by cooperating with each other we can buy whatever we want without going out and get the most satisfactory goods at the lowest price．
此处是由疑问代词"whatever"引导的宾语从句，"whatever"在从句中作动词"want"的宾语．
【高分句型三】
3．I got the tickets as well as two bottles of green tea which saved me so much．
此处是由关系代词"which"引导的定语从句，先行词为"the tickets as well as two bottles of green tea"，关系代词"which"在从句中主语．
【高分句型四】
4．Secondly，buy with clear purpose no matter how cheap it is．
此处是由疑问副词"however或no matter how"引导的让步状语从句，结构为"no matter how/however+形容词+主语+谓语"．

解答 The passage introduces the concept of group buying and its origins．Group buying developed rapidly and became more and more popular in China，resulting from the discounts given．【高分句型一】（概括）
From my point of view，the advantages of group buying are obvious．For one thing，by cooperating with each other we can buy whatever we want without going out and get the most satisfactory goods at the lowest price．【高分句型二】For another，manufacturers can sell goods on a larger scale and reduce marketing expenses．（看法及理由）
Last week，I surfed a well-known group buying website for two film tickets．With only 30 yuan，I got the tickets as well as two bottles of green tea which saved me so much．【高分句型三】lIt was a very nice experience．（经历）
As for suggestions for group buying，firstly，you should read the advertisements and the comments from other customers carefully．Secondly，buy with clear purpose no matter how cheap it is．【高分句型四】Thirdly，it is better to shop on famous and reliable websites to avoid being cheated by some cheating websites．（建议---个人观点）

点评 读写任务型写作是将阅读与写作有机结合，要求考生既能读懂文章信息，又要依据要求规范连贯地表达内容，其中准确概括很有挑战且十分重要，根据记叙文、议论文、说明文等不同文体作相应概括，总的来说，遵循以下步骤：确定主题句；寻找关键词；重构主题句；重组支持句．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．