Question

（本短文10处需要改动，其中有8处需要改错，一处需要添词，一处需要删词）

I like music very much, pop songs particularly. Every evening then I am doing homework and at weekends when I at home, I always play some of my favorite songs on my tape recorder. The familiar patterns of notes attracts me into the colorfully world of music. Now and then I stopped to follow the songs. Sometimes, my mother comes in, asking me to fix my attention to my homework. She does not like the pop music. Like most grown-ups, she enjoys folk songs, because the peaceful music reminds her of their beautiful life when she was young. It is a truth which people of different age understand music differently and enjoy different kinds of music.

 

Answer 1

1.then 改when

2.I 后面加am

3.attracts改attract

4.colourfully 改colourful或colorful

5.stopped改 stop

6.attention 后面的to 改on

7.the pop music前面的the 去掉.

8.their 改her

9.which改that

10.age 改ages

【解析】

试题分析：本文讲述了作者喜欢的音乐很多，尤其是流行歌曲。而作者的母亲像大多数成年人那样，她喜欢的民歌。不同年龄段的人以不同的方式理解音乐，享受不同种类的音乐，这是音乐的一个真理。

1.

2.在周末的时候我在家里。主语I，后面缺少联系动词be，所以I 后面加am。

3.

4.。world of music前面应该用形容词形式，所以colourfully 改colourful或colorful。

5.现在，然后我停下来跟歌曲。表示泛指的在上下午用in，所以On—in。

6.要我把注意力集中到我的家庭作业上。fix attention on sth把注意力集中到……上，因此attention 后面的to 改on。

7.她不喜欢流行音乐。music是抽象名词，所以前面不加定冠词the。

8.因为平静的音乐让她想起了她年轻时美丽的生活。从上下文可知，their 改her。

9.此句中that引导的从句是主语从句，that只起连接作用，故which改that。

10.是复数,所以age 改ages。

考点：短文改错。