Question

1．假设你是李华，你校英文报举办有关因特网的征文活动，请根据下列要求，写一篇短文，提出你对如何使用因特网的看法．
要求：
1．合理使用（看新闻、交际、查信息；限制时间）；
2．避免的事情（玩游戏、浪费时间、影响学习）．
注意：
1．词数100词左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Nowadays the Internet brings great convenience to us．We should make the most of it and use it wisely．We can be aware of what happens both at home and abroad through the Internet．（高分句型一）We can also communicate with others，using the Internet．In our studies，we can obtain almost all the information from it．But remember：we should limit our time to use the Internet．
Everything has two sides．It is obvious that the Internet has several disadvantages，which can cause serious problems．（高分句型二）Therefore，we mustn't devote too much time to playing online games，only to waste our precious time and affect our studies!（高分句型三）All in all，we had better make use of the Internet wisely and make it help us．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假设你是李华，你校英文报举办有关因特网的征文活动，请根据下列要求，写一篇短文，提出你对如何使用因特网的看法，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：合理使用（看新闻、交际、查信息；限制时间）；避免的事情（玩游戏、浪费时间、影响学习）．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：make the most of 充分利用；be aware of 意识到；at home and abroad在国内外；First of all首先；devote to致力于；
We can be aware of what happens both at home and abroad through the Internet．（高分句型一）
It is obvious that the Internet has several disadvantages，which can cause serious problems．（高分句型二）Therefore，we mustn't devote too much time to playing online games，only to waste our precious time and affect our studies!（高分句型三）

解答 Nowadays the Internet brings great convenience to us．We should make the most of it and use it wisely．We can be aware of what happens both at home and abroad through the Internet．（高分句型一）We can also communicate with others，using the Internet．In our studies，we can obtain almost all the information from it．But remember：we should limit our time to use the Internet．
       Everything has two sides．It is obvious that the Internet has several disadvantages，which can cause serious problems．（高分句型二）Therefore，we mustn't devote too much time to playing online games，only to waste our precious time and affect our studies!（高分句型三）All in all，we had better make use of the Internet wisely and make it help us．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．