Question

6．请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章．
During a recent Senior Three English lesson，the teacher caught Xiao Li，a female student，busily typing messages on her cell-phone．To the teacher's surprise，Xiao Li wasn't just texting her friends the latest gossip．She was actually blogging about what was being taught in the classroom，sharing her opinion about the information and material with her classmates and other students．
The case aroused a heated discussion among teachers and students city-wide．Miss Li，and English teacher from another nearby school said，"I am amazed at how creative the students can be when writing about personal feelings and experiences．"But other teachers are worried that blog-addiction may interfere with their students'study．
A supporter and classmate of Xiao Li said，"We love her blog!We all read it each dy and can't wait to see what she writes about next．Her interesting stories and great suggestions on study really help to motivate us．And it adds a little fun to our stressful life．"Another student blogger admitted that he often works late into the night，writing his blog and responding to comments posted there．"Sometimes I don't even have time to finish my homework．I can't help myself．I really have a lot to say．"
[写作内容]
1．用约 30 个单词写出上文概要；
2．用约 120 个单词就"中学生博客"的问题进行讨论，内容包括：
（1）中学生博客的利和弊；
（2）你对中学生博客的态度
（3）关于此问题的建议．
[写作要求]
1．在作文中可以使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不能直接引用原文的句子；
2．阐述观点或提供论据时，不能直接引用原文语句；
3．作文中不能出现真实姓名和班级名称；
4．不必写标题．
[评分标准]
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇对于原文进行拓展的作文．根据原文可知用一般现在时态，根据要求用第一人称和第三人称．内容包括：一 复述文章概要；二 中学生博客的利和弊；三作者对中学生博客的态度；四关于此问题的建议．
高分句型：
1．What happened in the class showed that blogging has become increasingly popular among middle school students．
句中What happened in the class 是主语从句．that blogging has become increasingly popular among middle school students．是宾语从句，其中的 blogging 做从句的主语．
在班上发生的事表明，博客在中学生里变得越来越流行了．
2．On the other hand，blogging allows students the chance to write about the things that are most important to them．句子里On the other hand起连接作用．that are most important to them．是定语从句，that 代指the things．
另一方面，博客给了学生一个书写自己最重要的事的机会．

解答 What happened in the class showed that blogging has become increasingly popular among middle school students【高分句型一】．Some teachers and students view it as a great way to share ideas and motivate students，while others fear it will interfere with students'study．（复述文章概要）
    There are arguments about student-blogging，so some are for it and some are against it．On the negative side，if students blog too frequently it may interfere with their study．And some people are afraid that some inappropriate topics may be discussed on the Internet．On the other hand，blogging allows students the chance to write about the things that are most important to them【高分句型二】．Because they are interested in those topics，they will be more motivated to write，which helps practice their writing skills．It will also give he blog-readers the chance to practice their reading skills，too．Furthermore，blog-based discussions will help to develop students'ability to think independently and communicate with others．（中学生博客的利和弊）
  For the above reasons I am generally a big supporter of student-blogging．（作者对中学生博客的态度）Of course，there have to be some limits such as parents monitoring their children to make sure they don't spend too much time on it and the subjects discussed are suitable．（关于此问题的建议）

点评 这是一篇据原文拓展的作文．
写作时，不要为了追求"一鸣惊人"而不愿使用熟悉的常用词，去找一些生冷的词汇，对这些一知半解的词你不会用，不知道如何搭配，结果适得其反，使文章显的生硬、不协调，甚至错误百出，所以要实事求是地把握，避免不必要的失分．