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10．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Velinda下个月将在你校参加一个交换生项目．在此期间她希望你能教她汉语．请根据以下要点，用英语给她写封信．
时间：每天下午5：00-7：00
地点：你家书房
内容：1．日常会话
2．中文歌曲
3．中国节日
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头语已为你写好．
Dear Velinda，
Glad to hear from you．I get to know that you are coming to my school as an exchange student．（高分句型一）You asked me whether I would like to teach you Chinese in my spare time．My answer is definitely yes．My plan is as follows：
We can have our Chinese class in my study from 5 pm．to 7 pm．after school．In the class，we will practice spoken Chinese and listen to some beautiful Chinese songs．What's more，I'd like to introduce some Chinese festivals to you，such as the Spring Festival，the Lantern Festival．（高分句型二）
I believe you can improve your Chinese and we'll have a good time together．（高分句型三）
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息美国朋友Velinda下个月将在你校参加一个交换生项目．在此期间她希望你能教她汉语．请根据以下要点，用英语给她写封信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：时间：每天下午5：00-7：00；地点：你家书房
内容：日常会话；中文歌曲；中国节日  2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：hear from收到…的来信；in my spare time在空闲时间；have a good time过得愉快
I get to know that you are coming to my school as an exchange student．（高分句型一）
What's more，I'd like to introduce some Chinese festivals to you，such as the Spring Festival，the Lantern Festival．（高分句型二）
I believe you can improve your Chinese and we'll have a good time together．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Velinda，
      Glad to hear from you．I get to know that you are coming to my school as an exchange student．（高分句型一）You asked me whether I would like to teach you Chinese in my spare time．My answer is definitely yes．My plan is as follows：
     We can have our Chinese class in my study from 5pm．to 7 pm．after school．In the class，we will practice spoken Chinese and listen to some beautiful Chinese songs．What's more，I'd like to introduce some Chinese festivals to you，such as the Spring Festival，the Lantern Festival．（高分句型二）
     I believe you can improve your Chinese and we'll have a good time together．（高分句型三）
     Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．