Question

19．假如你是李华，刚从外国度假回来，你对度假期间的宾馆很不满意，宾馆房间小，有时没有热水，网络连接慢，食物不新鲜．请给该宾馆负责人写封信，说明情况，并要求赔偿．
注意：1．词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅．
Dear Sir or Madam，
I am Li Hua．I stayed in your hotel a week ago．I am writing to complain about my recent stay at your hotel．I have never stayed in a worse place before．
I was disappointed with the quality of the room，it was too small．And the bathroom sometimes did not have a shower．Besides，seldom have I had such terrible food．However，I was most shocked by the bill which I was presented with on my departure．
I shall expected financial compersation of $300．Otherwise，I intend to turn to your national tourist authorities for assistance．
Looking forward to hearing from you．
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
And the bathroom sometimes did not have a shower．Besides，seldom have I had such terrible food．
浴室有时没有淋浴．除此之外，我很少有这样糟糕的食物．
高分句型二：
I shall expected financial compersation of $300．Otherwise，I intend to turn to your national tourist authorities for assistance．
我预计300美元的财政补偿．否则，我打算向贵国的旅游主管部门寻求帮助．

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
I am Li Hua．I stayed in your hotel a week ago．I am writing to complain about my recent stay at your hotel．I have never stayed in a worse place before．
I was disappointed with the quality of the room，it was too small．And the bathroom sometimes did not have a shower．Besides，seldom have I had such terrible food（高分句型一）．However，I was most shocked by the bill which I was presented with on my departure．
I shall expected financial compersation of $300．Otherwise，I intend to turn to your national tourist authorities for assistance（高分句型二）．
Looking forward to hearing from you．
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．