Question

9．假如你叫李华，是青岛市某中学学生．最近你校在为一批来自加拿大的学生征询寄宿家庭，你有意申请．请根据提供的信息和自身条件用英语给加拿大Montreal 中学校长写封信，说明你申请的理由（如住房条件，语言优势，接待经验等）．
注意：
1．文章必须包括所有要点；
2．词数120-150，信的开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear sir，
I'm writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families of the Canadian students．
We have a large and clean house，which lies in a beautiful area of the city．I'm good at English and my parents are both professors of English，so I'm sure we won't have any difficulty communicating with English speakers．My father is an excellent driver and we will be very glad to show foreign students around some nearby places of interest in our own car．Last month we received two American students．We had a great time．Besides，my mother cooks well，so the students will be able to enjoy delicious Chinese food．I would greatly appreciate it if I could have the chance to make friends with them．
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇开放式作文，写作时不仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题．
亮点句型一：We have a large and clean house，which lies in a beautiful area of the city．我们有一个又大又干净的房子，坐落在城市的一个美丽的地区．这是一个非限制性定语从句，which指代前文中的先行词house．
亮点句型二：I would greatly appreciate it if I could have the chance to make friends with them．如果能有机会和他们交朋友，我将不胜感激．I would appreciate it if 其后要用虚拟语气．

解答 Dear sir，
       I'm writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families of the Canadian students．
       We have a large and clean house，which lies in a beautiful area of the city．（亮点句型一）I'm good at English and my parents are both professors of English，so I'm sure we won't have any difficulty communicating with English speakers．My father is an excellent driver and we will be very glad to show foreign students around some nearby places of interest in our own car．Last month we received two American students．We had a great time．Besides，my mother cooks well，so the students will be able to enjoy delicious Chinese food．I would greatly appreciate it if I could have the chance to make friends with them．（亮点句型二）
      Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 考查开放性作文写作，开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示．给考生自由发挥的余地较大．对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力．在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭．同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性．